i dont give a shit about a damned title

By Syn

I cant breath
it wasnt supposed to be true
you werent suppposed to go through with it
and i tried so hard
i tried
did all i could for you
i am dying for you
im empty so empty
i hurt from head to toe
but my mouth is numb
my head spinning
thoughts racing
memories
what do i do
what do i do
im desparate for anything you can give me
just touch me
hold me
they're asking why im crying and i cant tell them
they shouldnt see me crying
but you give me choice
you left me with nothing
nothing to feel
nothing to think
no life to live
i cant do this
i cant do this without you
anything without you
can i rewind time
i would rewind it
i would erase everything i could
i would erase the pain
please just stop the pain

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Copyright 2004 Dead On Arrival
Published on Wednesday, July 28, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • vaultgrl On Thursday, June 16, 2005, vaultgrl (185)By person wrote:

    I love how you wear your emotion on your sleeve....great write

  • DarkWolf On Friday, September 3, 2004, DarkWolf (415)By person wrote:

    The last line is haunting.. this is so full of pain. amazing. -Michael

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