All Torn Up Over You

By mysticventures

There's not a part of your body

I wouldn't touch

You could chop off my hands

Yet still they would grope

Longing to touch your flesh and hold

Your firmness


There's not a part of your body

I wouldn't lick

You could cut out my tongue

And still it would moved of it's own accord

Over every square inch

of your lusciouness


There's not a part of your body

I wouldn't kiss

You could ripp off my lips

Still they would silently call your name

And remain succulent and moist

for your pleasure


There's not a part of your body

I wouldn't love

You could tear out my heart

And still it would beat for you

The heat of my passion

keeping it alive






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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Wednesday, July 28, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: The blend of passion, pain, and desire merged perfectly

  • Sin On Sunday, February 11, 2007, Sin (1168)By person wrote:

    absolutely lovely...

  • LovelyAssassinx On Wednesday, July 6, 2005, LovelyAssassinx (151)By person wrote:

    This is amazing. Very Beautiful. ~Sara

  • sixsixnine On Friday, July 30, 2004, sixsixnine (477)By person wrote:

    i feel the same ... over & over i keep thinking of you, & now after speaking to you ... over & over i want to be w/ you.... you'r an awesome soul.... with such talent.. it's only right *669*

  • Lynaes On Wednesday, July 28, 2004, Lynaes (859)By person wrote:

    I absolutely adore the concept of this.. the idea of being torn apart by this person, but still wanting them. Raw, passionate, a perfect and intelligent write. I'm deeply impressed by this.

  • Northstar On Wednesday, July 28, 2004, Northstar (375)By person wrote:

    oohhh I like this one a lot -- the way your desire/love/passion transcend your body, time and space is very beautiful

  • A former member wrote: interesting work. Love the last stanza. ~ Psychotic

  • Soulseeker On Wednesday, July 28, 2004, Soulseeker (108)By person wrote:

    Sometimes it's hard to capture passion, but you did a great job with this one.

  • Whisper On Wednesday, July 28, 2004, Whisper (112)By person wrote:

    I love this peace,I can feel the passion seeping off of this write.Nice -Lich-

  • mysticventures On Wednesday, July 28, 2004, mysticventures (538)By person wrote:

    just a flash of inspiration before work this morning- no comments necessary

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