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You and I
By mysticventures
You and I -
Its like we are on opposite sides of the same mountain,
With neither having reached the summit as of yet.
Naturally, our views and perspectives will differ.
And that is ok.
For it is the climb itself that matters -
not the route
But do know this -
If I reach the top first,
I will offer my hand to help you up.
And hand in hand
We can stand together
And take in the view
As one
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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Tuesday, July 27, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "You and I"
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A former member wrote:
Inspirational, not overly wordy, yet still filled to the brim. Becuase of the title I now have 'Anybody Listening' by Queensryche stuck in my head.
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On Wednesday, July 28, 2004, Lynaes
(859)
wrote:
Echoing the wonderful anth.. a stunning write for sure, I adore what you've expressed through this, and how you've portrayed it. Breath taking and heart warming. Incredible work.
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On Wednesday, July 28, 2004, Anth
(1133) wrote:
this is a stunning write,i so loved it,the imagery idea and weight of this is a mountainous display of talent,made me smile
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On Wednesday, July 28, 2004, Anth
(1133) wrote:
and on my return to this write,its so awesome,uplifting cos i think of my love as i read it,and its just such a cool poem
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On Tuesday, July 27, 2004, sixsixnine
(477) wrote:
such talent.... again you strike me with deep love-filled poetry......* i love this* 669 *
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A former member wrote:
this is so beautiful. I could actually see this image in my head. Very sweet and descriptive write. ~serpentine~
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On Tuesday, July 27, 2004, elisa
(1616) wrote:
Wow...I got a good picture of this poem in my mind...Beautiful:)
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