forever in eternity (feat.the exquisite glasshouse)

By knightmirror


looking beyond the loveliness of loneliness
and all its interactive impressions
effervescent spirits envelope every part of my soul
and I could get lost in your ubiquitous ecstasy

aura's shine in the almighty light from your
eyes that talk fluently with every blink
leaving me shaken and stirred like the butterflies
swimming inside my guts instinct full of
nerves wound
tightly around
your soul

Shrouding myself in your vibrant array
you could stare into my eyes
and never see a thing beyond yourself
(you’re all I’ve seen)
all I’ve dreamed of seeing
and I could never walk away
clear my conscience of all you were
if I didn’t tell you
how I’ve built my world around you

I’ve built it with bricks made of love and trust
stronger than any man has ever seen or ever will
this is something only you can feast upon
this table set for us dining on each others silence
in this echoing chasm full of dancing smiles
held in one another’s corners of luscious lips
take me, as I have taken you
into my heart
a beautiful start
for you and I

The temple of our spirits combines
and worship is inevitable
bowing before your beauty and your grandeur
I’ll explore this altar with more than my mind
my hands create shrines to your body
and praise you with merging lips

Lying inside this cathedral of you
heaven reveals itself in music we make
completed we are now, you and i
completed is life even after we die

together

forever in eternity

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Copyright 2004 knightmirror
Published on Sunday, July 25, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Sin On Monday, December 13, 2004, Sin (1168)By person wrote:

    this was incredible...beauty captured in words and expressed flawlessly...the third stanza made my heart do a funny little summersault ~kristy

  • DoctorAsh On Monday, August 9, 2004, DoctorAsh (373)By person wrote:

    Excellent - there are some very powerful and inspirational phrases in this write - to transform feelings into meaning - in words is a fete we all seek - i give this a 9 [D&A]

  • NikesRain On Monday, July 26, 2004, NikesRain (1298)By person wrote:

    ..this was absolutely awesome, both of you. You make an excellent team and your combined talents just add to the shine of this piece.

  • Anth On Sunday, July 25, 2004, Anth (1133)By person wrote:

    incredible work, i loved the fifth verse, the combinaton of two great artists at thier best

  • knightmirror On Sunday, July 25, 2004, knightmirror (426)By person wrote:

    jezz,i'll say it before and i'll say it again.THANK YOU for this,for everything.i feel like i've known you for years.hopefully i will.*bows*much love,chris

  • glasshouse On Sunday, July 25, 2004, glasshouse (548)By person wrote:

    Likewise, Chris. It was certainly my pleasure. I enjoyed this collaboration. Anytime you wanna have another... just say the words. Loves-Glass

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