When the Outcome Switches
By Soulseeker
He spit fire in my face,
not knowing he'd soon take my place.
How does it feel to be treated the same?
My anger is raging and can't be tamed.
I despise everything you ever said,
don't think I didn't know you were fucking with my head.
You think you know everything and your so smart,
but I'll tell you I'm about to rip your world apart.
why did you mistake my kindness as a weakness?
when I do the same you'll be left speechless.
You will reget ever dicking me over,
and when I am done you'll hate being sober.
I can honestly say I fucking hate your shit,
from the way it looks you'll need a first aid kit.
Just rememeber a band-aid can't cover your teeth,
they'll be on the ground while you kiss my feet.
So keep telling yourself you are a man,
when you feel the pain behind my hand.
You are not a man, I didn't know what I was looking at,
it's just little old you, a fucking pussy cat.
Just remember you can't play a fucking dealer,
so quit wasting your time and find a voo-doo healer.
So run on home tell them what I did,
but while your'e at it tell them what you hid.
You did this to yourself, you know that right?
You should have walked away that's how real men fight.
You aren't perfect you have your flaws,
take a life line.. Fuck it make five calls.
Take your broken soul and send it to hell,
I'll be waiting on my restraing orders to come in the mail.
They'll never find a cure for men who are bitches,
tell me how it feels when the outcome switches!!!!
Comments on "When the Outcome Switches"
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On Monday, November 7, 2005, Mistress Shadow
(252) wrote:
Your rhymes are so unique; this sounds like something from some over played rap song. Also, your rage on such a topic is inspiring.Excellent piece. ~T~
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A former member wrote:
The sounds like a song from BLACK FLAG. Henry Rollins could've written it, but I'm grateful you did. ~Shane~
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On Tuesday, August 3, 2004, Lifeless
(39) wrote:
I especially like this line, "why did you mistake my kindness as a weakness?". The whole poem was very strong. It puts forth a message a lot of us need to adhere to.
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On Sunday, August 1, 2004, Angel With The Scabbed Wings
(40) wrote:
I was left speechless. I love this peice. Alot. Truely one of my favorite poems i have heard in a long time. serious. I LOVe This. more more more! The vengance the anger the relif :) you got me all excited.
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On Sunday, August 1, 2004, MABUS
(20) wrote:
i can't seem to find the words to comment on this one...
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On Saturday, July 31, 2004, Soulseeker
(108) wrote:
Yeah there are a lot of women who are bastards but at least they don't beat their boyfriends in the head like my ex "man bitch" did.... LOL
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On Saturday, July 31, 2004, ONEANDLONELY
(117) wrote:
"they'll never find a cure for men who are bitches". how about women who are bastards? very cool concept