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Dark Psalm
By elisa
Dark Psalm
the sound
rising from
deep inside
where the soul
screams buried
beneath the
shit
roaming chained
by gravity
under the
one-sided
glass
clothed in
rotting skin
wearing flesh
to death
bound by the
original sin
circling
without
an end
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Copyright 2004 elisa2
Published on Tuesday, July 20, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Sunday, September 24, 2017, Dimensions
(95)
wrote:
Amazed at your imagery. You paint a surreal nightmarish quality from begining to end...how do you pick a favorite stanza when each is so vividly insane. Nice job.
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On Friday, January 27, 2012, Phalanx
(679) wrote:
I really took to this because it brought me back to what it is being dirty in a gritty, shit kicking sort way. A certain degree of filth should be appreciated and worn proudly. Makes me like myself. Thank you.
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On Wednesday, May 18, 2011, Zyrnuvex
(48) wrote:
The unchenchable thirst for knowledge, bane of sentient existence. Reality of its existence screaming from inside us, heard from all around us. The desire to think and be....... a sin....
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On Sunday, March 25, 2007, Enigma
(91) wrote:
Amazing!!!
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On Wednesday, December 20, 2006, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
Raw and beautiful.
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A former member wrote:
enriched w/ a dark truth....well done!
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On Friday, August 5, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy
(358) wrote:
rising above the mire i gag choke and gasp for air... finding none i weep... every second of the day i repeat... every year of the universe we repeat...
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A former member wrote:
I think it's amazing how you can say sooo much in so few words and make me feel all different types of feelings while youre at it. good work -ariel
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On Thursday, March 10, 2005, jaunty pill
(47) wrote:
A good solid ending. You have a way with directional short writes. They seems to say so much in an immense and small space. It cooks up some thoughts that are perplexing and rare. Tempered and moody. Lovely.
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A former member wrote:
This had a very vague feel to it, at least it did to me, and I think it added an element of mystery to the overall quality of the poem. Not sure what to enterpret this as but know that I enjoyed what _I_ took out of it. ~Ship!
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A former member wrote:
"Turn off the dark!" Emily cried! *faves* ~Shane~
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On Sunday, November 7, 2004, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
wow, and your blond like me .. :OP *makes no sense to noone but him*
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A former member wrote:
I like this. its very chilling alot of graphic detail in so few words.
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On Wednesday, July 21, 2004, Jane
(53) wrote:
Wow... this was dark. I LOVED IT!!!!!
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On Tuesday, July 20, 2004, Northstar
(375) wrote:
I love your word choice and the structure in this one--nicely done
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