So She Cries For Both

By Simply Me

Tonight she cries for both of them.
The one she has, the one she wants.
Confused by her own emotions,
so the two of them she taunts.

One claims her by the ring she wears,
the other just wants it gone.
They compete to make her happy,
and she knows this thing is wrong.

One says he'll give her everything,
the other say's everything is her.
She doesn't know which one's better,
doesn't know whom she prefers.

She loves them both and knows,
they won't wait for her for long,
so she cries while she decides,
where it is that she belongs.

The excitment of someone new,
the comfort of someone she knows.
Her heart will never be complete again,
cause one will take half as he goes.

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Copyright 2004 Simply Me
Published on Monday, July 19, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • MorganaRose On Tuesday, November 20, 2012, MorganaRose (74)By person wrote:

    The back and forth of this situation and the back and forth of the emotions is portrayed perfectly in your words. Great write.

  • XxSinkingDarknessxX On Wednesday, April 12, 2006, XxSinkingDarknessxX (8)By person wrote:

    i can really relate to this poem, it's practically my life

  • TornPaperDoll On Friday, March 24, 2006, TornPaperDoll (63)By person wrote:

    Awww..i love this, very beautiful.TPD

  • yslehc On Wednesday, November 23, 2005, yslehc (334)By person wrote:

    hooooly crap you were right :P i think we must be going through the exact same thing.. you express things better lol... i just screamed out a rant, you wrote a beautiful poem. awesome job, depressing situation, i know..

  • A former member wrote: Man can I relate!!! I am in an open relationship, and if your guys would wake up and realize if they accept each other, neither has to lose you, but hey no one understands openness, great write.

  • A former member wrote: damn the heart break which you convey so well

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