Sweat of the Ocean
By Cwn Annwn
Lay
in your
arms
the heat
embracing
like warm sun
on the flesh,
wet with sweat
from the ocean
half naked
holding
eachother
not
wanting to leave.
Feeling the waves
of love
splash up on
the shores
of my body
stare into my eyes
get lost
in the depths
of your
heart.
I reach
the deepest of thoughts
and all I need
is you.
Let me
get lost-
let me
stay-
here forever.
I'll leave you
with lasting memories
to tame
your wildest
dreams
throughout
our seperation.
~GoNe~
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Copyright 2004 Noctem Aeternus
Published on Thursday, July 15, 2004.
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On Sunday, January 20, 2013, Squishy
(32) wrote:
I imagine it in every line it takes me back to a day with a similar inbrace thanks you well done
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A former member wrote:
Gone but lives in the heart forever
For eternal love
Gives life to dreams
And ignite the nous
Like a soul on fire
Or the Sun in the heart
Of Theo universe
This poem leaves
Nothing in the mind
Of mine but telegraphic
Memories with love
And peace.
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On Sunday, January 20, 2013, Stephanie Sideways
(276) wrote:
I have a memory just like this and it was nice to be taken back there through your poem!
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On Tuesday, April 4, 2006, -Oz-
(134) wrote:
you need to WRITE MORE!!! it's been AGES!!
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On Thursday, September 16, 2004, -Oz-
(134) wrote:
wow, this is quite lovely..."Feeling the waves of kindness splash up on the shores of my body"...nice
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On Saturday, July 24, 2004, Soulseeker
(108) wrote:
This is great and I admire the way the picture came to me instantly! Bethany
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On Thursday, July 22, 2004, Mistress Shadow
(252) wrote:
So graphic and perfect you could just about touch it. ~T~
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On Wednesday, September 8, 2004, Dayer
(162) wrote:
I was thinking the same thing! Awesome write
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On Saturday, July 17, 2004, bloody LOVEly
(86) wrote:
aww! [sorry....its just...i want to pet it! no...its not a cat. okay..i am sorry, im leaving my shitty ass comment now. +_+