Sweat of the Ocean

By Cwn Annwn

Lay
in your
arms
the heat
embracing
like warm sun
on the flesh,
wet with sweat
from the ocean
half naked
holding
eachother
not
wanting to leave.
Feeling the waves
of love
splash up on
the shores
of my body
stare into my eyes
get lost
in the depths
of your
heart.
I reach
the deepest of thoughts
and all I need
is you.
Let me
get lost-
let me
stay-
here forever.
I'll leave you
with lasting memories
to tame
your wildest
dreams
throughout
our seperation.
~GoNe~

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Copyright 2004 Noctem Aeternus
Published on Thursday, July 15, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Squishy On Sunday, January 20, 2013, Squishy (32)By person wrote:

    I imagine it in every line it takes me back to a day with a similar inbrace thanks you well done

  • A former member wrote: Gone but lives in the heart forever For eternal love Gives life to dreams And ignite the nous Like a soul on fire Or the Sun in the heart Of Theo universe This poem leaves Nothing in the mind Of mine but telegraphic Memories with love And peace.

  • Stephanie Sideways On Sunday, January 20, 2013, Stephanie Sideways (276)By person wrote:

    I have a memory just like this and it was nice to be taken back there through your poem!

  • -Oz- On Tuesday, April 4, 2006, -Oz- (134)By person wrote:

    you need to WRITE MORE!!! it's been AGES!!

  • -Oz- On Thursday, September 16, 2004, -Oz- (134)By person wrote:

    wow, this is quite lovely..."Feeling the waves of kindness splash up on the shores of my body"...nice

  • Soulseeker On Saturday, July 24, 2004, Soulseeker (108)By person wrote:

    This is great and I admire the way the picture came to me instantly! Bethany

  • Mistress Shadow On Thursday, July 22, 2004, Mistress Shadow (252)By person wrote:

    So graphic and perfect you could just about touch it. ~T~

  • Dayer On Wednesday, September 8, 2004, Dayer (162)By person wrote:

    I was thinking the same thing! Awesome write

  • bloody LOVEly On Saturday, July 17, 2004, bloody LOVEly (86)By person wrote:

    aww! [sorry....its just...i want to pet it! no...its not a cat. okay..i am sorry, im leaving my shitty ass comment now. +_+

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