Look At Me

By aXe FactoR

Missing you would be an understatement of what I feel
It’s crazy how my feelings get so charged when I’m around you
Yet you’ll never really know how I really feel
I don’t think you see
The feelings reflected right out
The only wire of connection between you & me





Don’t turn your back towards me
I challenge you
To stare right back into my eyes
& Turn this love
Into a two way thing
I don’t want to be walking in a one-way street alone


Like a sheep
Not found (just as yet)
You are the shepherd
Who could guide me out of this tunnel
& bath me in the light at the end of it

I know I’m no phoenix
But can I think of you today...tomorrow…& everyday afterwards?
Give me a reason to do that

--------------------Love Me Back--------------------

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Copyright 2004 aXe_FacTor
Published on Sunday, July 11, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • BleedSilver On Monday, July 19, 2004, BleedSilver (300)By person wrote:

    This reminds me of an ICP song...~Mikey

  • sixsixnine On Monday, July 19, 2004, sixsixnine (487)By person wrote:

    i can't help but sing when reading your work the inside of a brocken beautiful soul* miss talking to you hope you're doing good* your friend *669*

  • aXe FactoR On Tuesday, July 20, 2004, aXe FactoR (342)By person wrote:

    :) miss u 2.

  • Blood of Winter On Monday, July 19, 2004, Blood of Winter (300)By person wrote:

    Beautiful a plea that I hope for your sake does not fall on def ears...or blind eyes and a closed heart.

  • A former member wrote: provoked a storm of thought...elegance of emotional art...well done on a beautiful peice

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