Deathly Kiss

By Syn

Amidst the fog
she follows through
the darkened path
that leads to you

And through this fog
she sees your eyes
but body hidden
in your disguise

Your eyes so deep
and vivid red
eternal gaze
but nothing said

You wrap her in
your strengthened arms
you promise her
you'll cause no harm

And all at once
she starts to bleed
tiny holes from
your tiny teeth

Her soul flies freely
into the fog
and sings a joyous
melodic song

For now she knows
she wanted this
to die within you
and taste your kiss

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Copyright 2004 Syn
Published on Monday, July 5, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Dilated View On Wednesday, December 30, 2009, Dilated View (583)By person wrote:

    Sounds very venemous. Like the serpent's embrace. But it was also beautiful. Interesting read.

  • Mahakala On Saturday, April 15, 2006, Mahakala (209)By person wrote:

    if only all deadly kisses were soo sweet...

  • A former member wrote: Not usually my cup of tea but the lyrical aspect was great

  • nesbia On Monday, July 5, 2004, nesbia (15)By person wrote:

    awwww

  • Lifeless On Monday, July 5, 2004, Lifeless (39)By person wrote:

    Okay...now this is sweet as hell! Not only does it flow well it is ominous, dark and well written. It gave me a chill.

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