Succumb

By Syn

My dying fate
these gathered traits
of something I should care for

My longing hate
this weathered mate
of something I should love

My buried hate
this walkless gait
to something that I die for

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Copyright 2004 Syn
Published on Tuesday, June 29, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Alacer_Cogitatus On Wednesday, June 30, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus (140)By person wrote:

    wonderful syn. Short, yet deep. A_C

  • murder_in_clubland On Tuesday, June 29, 2004, murder_in_clubland (388)By person wrote:

    I love the rhyme scheme i love it all,short ,sweet and to the point lovely~ss

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