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Psychosis
By Syn
Sheltered heart.
Outraged mind.
False forced soul.
Tears I've cried.
Shouts of Anguish.
Inquired dreams.
Punished desires.
Pitch black scenes.
Heavy laden hopes.
Blocked out pain.
Broken wings.
Blood rust stains.
Tarnished world.
Beckoned calls.
Faded lights.
Life scraped raw.
Brutal victim.
Beaten Blue.
Heart-raced words.
Killing you.
Tried and guilty.
Case I've lost.
Death row bound.
Petty Cost.
Justice craved.
No mercy found.
Pleasant hates.
Think out loud.
Evidence craved.
No alibi.
Arresting sanity.
No reasons why.
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Copyright 2004 Syn
Published on Tuesday, June 29, 2004.
Filed under:
"Graphic Art"
Comments on "Psychosis"
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On Tuesday, August 28, 2007, ArtemisticSin
(17)
wrote:
My kind of rhyme scheme, I like it a lot, very good imagery...
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A former member wrote:
Another wonderful piece. It gives an resonating echo in my mind...
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On Wednesday, June 30, 2004, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
a sharp and dark stream of conciousness..........well spoken.....urban
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A former member wrote:
This reminded me of my thoughts...rapid and they usually flow like that...with some sort of rhyme scheme.
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A former member wrote:
The image added a lot of the oomph, if you will, to this piece...however, if I were going to be critical, I would say that no matter how lovely this is, it might turn out better without rhyme.
Some of it seemed to be forced. I don't know if you apprecia
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A former member wrote:
*appreciate critical comments or not.
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A former member wrote:
The image is haunting...and I just think that some of this piece is exquisite..."Blood rust stains" especially. Just my opinion. Take it or leave it.
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A former member wrote:
I've never really read much of your works, but after this, I think I'll be coming back.
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On Tuesday, June 29, 2004, Syn
(76) wrote:
Thanks :) Criticism is always appreciated as long as it is constructive...I do thank you for your thoughts and your kind words..Thank You :D -Syn
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On Tuesday, June 29, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(388) wrote:
I love this...holy shit...this is your best yet,well i think...beautiful~ss
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful, powerful imagery
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A former member wrote:
ummmmm.....WOW!
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