you will not disobey Me (a work in progress, I think)
By Syn
The hair on the back of your neck is standing as the point of the shiny
blade moves softly across your skin.
I have a firm grip on the black leather handle, the blade heavy in My hand.
In the other hand I hold My whip, long and winding, new and ready for
beating.
I ask again why you have disobeyed, quickly losing My patience with you.
you mutter something of weakness, of a lack of self-control.
*crack* The whip snaps against your flesh, immediately welting you tender
sweet skin. The blade in My hand drops to the floor as you react to the
leather hitting your back.
I motion for you to hand it to Me, leaving you no time to think on the
pain I have inflicted.
I hear a timid cry, in a shaky voice, begging for mercy as I tear your
skin softly with the blade. "I will not be disobeyed" I say as the blade
slowly makes you bleed.
Comments on "you will not disobey Me (a work in progress, I think)"
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A former member wrote:
You caught it perfectly, will read more of your works
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On Saturday, June 26, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(388) wrote:
yummy and gorgeous you captured the moment perfectly....yahoo,actually this kindof helped me with my problem hehe thanks~ss
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A former member wrote:
i lie this poem syn, it is wonderful...i so can relate...just because that is what i like ...of well that is just me though ~ SS
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On Thursday, June 24, 2004, KittyStryker
(711) wrote:
see... i notice a trend. you never seem to write about the beautiful moments... when she pleases you with her service... or takes pain without flinching. :( constant punishment isn't any fun. makes the sub feel like she's a constant failure.
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On Thursday, June 24, 2004, Syn
(76) wrote:
What, Bast? Read Mistress and O/our lust...This is the first I have written about punishment.
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On Friday, June 25, 2004, KittyStryker
(711) wrote:
oh! you're right. :) i was reading someone else's work and i thought after reading this it was yours. good good. :) i just get sad reading all the punishment stuff. nm!