who cares

By sixsixnine

don't worry
don't hurry
never matters what you take
the time is now to make
the unbrocken curse break

just make believe we can see
that we must fucking be free
fucking for eternity
make believe you've never been deceived

don't worry
come hurry
never matters what we do
try harder to break thru

stoned , thrown , blown , & , alone
tripping on this infinite zone
overdosed my soul roams
foams, thoughts i cannot control
it's breaking my fucking skull
& i've never felt so dull
as the pain takes its' toll
I
fucking let go
let it over flow
& like i said before
nothing will ever be slow

it's always dark when i wake up
all fucked & perfect
dead spirits to disect
where's the rain
that would change
this dry soul restraint?

some logical reasons ,
for why i'm feining
for this fucking feeling
pointless & demeaning
only keeps me dreaming
fucking hurry
fucking worry
this shit will get more blury

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Copyright 2004 sixsixnine matthew parkey II
Published on Friday, June 18, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • capt_funguy On Tuesday, June 29, 2004, capt_funguy (778)By person wrote:

    go - fuckin' - go ... dug the 90 mph frantic hellride .... especially the last stanza .. cool man ... funguy

  • urbanhumility On Tuesday, June 22, 2004, urbanhumility (1175)By person wrote:

    brilliant, i truly felt this one, wise choice of words, folding upon eachother smoothly...........well done.......urban

  • Mute Serenade On Tuesday, June 22, 2004, Mute Serenade (445)By person wrote:

    it was so fast, i mean, it reads fast... it races your heart... and you push for the next line... to not know how safely the arrival at the end will be. Awesome write, hope you're back soon. Sue

  • A former member wrote: NOOOO!!!!!! 669 is gone, COME BAck SOON!

  • K_Love On Friday, June 18, 2004, K_Love (525)By person wrote:

    Wow... this is awesome. Great job on this. Sorry about your job though.. hang in there. ~Kirsten~

  • A former member wrote: I am sorry about your job, but keep writing things down definately because you have a great way of writing how you feel.

  • sixsixnine On Friday, June 18, 2004, sixsixnine (477)By person wrote:

    i lost my job so i wont be able to comment much anymore becouse i don't have a computer at home* but i will talk to all of you soon take care* 669 *

  • aXe FactoR On Sunday, June 20, 2004, aXe FactoR (335)By person wrote:

    i missed talking to u man..wondered where ur gone...hee hee, now i know. cant wait 2 read more of ya stuff & talk 2 ya again. miss ya! come back soon :) hugs, -MeL-

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