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At the bridge
By Future of Despond
At the bridge
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No particular Regard(less)
History I would
Of control, Recommend
Gravity an intermediate
Requests (insist) All Haste
My diminishing
Presence In my Absence
Regrettfully my submission does not of prose supplant cold equation
and
I begin to fall.
Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited.
Ask the author first.
Copyright 2004 Future Cosair of Despond
Published on Tuesday, June 15, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "At the bridge"
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On Sunday, July 10, 2011, carlosjackal
(3014)
wrote:
Brilliant..A nice muse-teaser with a knowing awareness of its format and structure.
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On Wednesday, May 10, 2006, Army Barbie
(324) wrote:
Hm. This was extremely interesting. I don't think I've read and reread something so much in a long time. I think it's the style it's in cause hot damn I was lost at first. But I think I'm in love with you lol
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A former member wrote:
awsome poem
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On Thursday, March 2, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
Wow I loved this:)
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On Wednesday, February 22, 2006, D3ADT0WN
(186) wrote:
Wow, This is a cool way you did this. I don't understand it much but it is good from what i see.
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On Thursday, June 23, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
The style and words are simply amazing.
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On Monday, May 2, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
interesting way of doing things. Great write ~*~TarT~*~
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A former member wrote:
like it for some odd reason..the words just seem to fit, as well as the lil a thingies...thanx
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On Tuesday, November 30, 2004, blue
(1454) wrote:
You should be extremely proud of yourself for this write...you've raised the bar! ~~FAVS LIST~ sincerely, Brian.
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A former member wrote:
I am speechless and to say the least, impressed. Unique in it's originality. Very divine. ~*~ Rose ~*~
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On Sunday, September 19, 2004, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
holy crap!!!!!!!!where have i been...apparently not reading to much...awesome job...****-knight
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A former member wrote:
wow I like this piece as well, can't wait to read more.
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On Thursday, September 9, 2004, Dayer
(162) wrote:
this was great :)
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On Monday, September 6, 2004, AHHH
(187) wrote:
wow, nice
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On Saturday, June 19, 2004, aXe FactoR
(335) wrote:
a very cool piece, never seen any poem as originally written as this...excellent indeed! keep writing & i'll keep reading... -MeL-
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On Thursday, June 17, 2004, Anth
(1133) wrote:
great great work, i understood the level of the first part especially, feelings ive often pondered, the structure here adds to its weight, im impressed
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