She

By Syn

if only maybe if i could see
this shadow clouding over me
and into this void i would be
a spectrum rainbow colored she

though grey and empty anguished me
enduring wars that kill the free
and cry within but never seen
a burned enslaved imprisoned she

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Copyright 2004 Synful
Published on Sunday, June 13, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Lifeless On Friday, June 18, 2004, Lifeless (39)By person wrote:

    Just plain “Wow”! Yes, the flow is incredible and is a very short poem you show amazing depth.

  • glasshouse On Monday, June 14, 2004, glasshouse (548)By person wrote:

    I love this piece. Its beautiful and it flows so magnificantly. I look forward to reading more... here I go. -Glass

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