6 + 9 Lines for 669* (a poem dedicated to 669*)

By aXe FactoR

-669-
He's so fine
Feels like a buddy
One whom I have known for a long time
He never fails to put a smile on my gloomy little face,
Fascinating me his gorgeous pieces of literary Art,
Which spells the best of the best.
& If you try putting him to a test,
I'm sure he'll kick some serious ass.
Cos he possess a poetry prowess
Coupled with such perfect rhyme
He's like no other talent,
& I just wanted to let him to know,
Why he bothered with me, someone so ordinary & cold.
But then I realized he was an angel, wonderfully crafted with a beautiful soul.

(it's not very well-written, but I hope you like it all the same. thanks for being such a lovely person you are. Much love, -MeL-)

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Copyright 2004 Psuedo_Me
Published on Thursday, June 3, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Zara Synn On Sunday, August 8, 2004, Zara Synn (57)By person wrote:

    Awww =)

  • A former member wrote: This is Really Good, Its better then Mine to 669, See EVERYONE LOVES 669!!!

  • sixsixnine On Saturday, June 5, 2004, sixsixnine (489)By person wrote:

    i'm am so loving it! thank you for this heart felt piece * i am trully humbled by this* i love you too * matthew *

  • The Fallen Angel On Thursday, June 3, 2004, The Fallen Angel (245)By person wrote:

    very thoughtful...+fallen one+

  • A former member wrote: this poem is excellent...it really shows,through writing, the emotion and feeling that you have for this person...

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