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Love's Pain and Torment
By Mischevious Princess
My heart's been broken...
I heard it shatter...
I felt it tear.
I look into the mirror...
I see tears streaming down...
I hear sniffles...
I taste salt.
I've never been "worthy"
of anyone...
I guess you're my proof.
My eyes sting,
I've no more tears to shed.
You should be more careful,
I tell myself...
less likely of getting hurt!
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Copyright 2004 Amber Young
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On Friday, June 4, 2004, Anth
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the flow was excellent i loved the first verse especially and also the second a lot of feeling in this
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A former member wrote:
Hmm...I think the line "Why does life has to suck so much?" is misplaced...otherwise, this is a very heartfelt poem..exercise your talent...I'll enjoy watching it blossom.
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