COINCIDENCE

HELLO.
GOODBYE.
I UNDERSTAND.
BUT WHY?
I HEAR THE TRUTH,
AND ITS ALL A LIE.
I'VE GIVEN UP,
STILL I CAN'T HELP BUT TRY.

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Published on Tuesday, June 1, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "COINCIDENCE"

On Sunday, August 28, 2005, abattoir (115) wrote:

short, sweet and above the point, I too love your style.
A former member wrote: Each line is like a punch in the face, but, a-very soft of courze. -END-
On Tuesday, June 22, 2004, Emptyness Inside Me (171) wrote:

excellent write, it's great that you still try even though you feel you should give up, very powerful poetry here, ~Emptyness~
A former member wrote: every word just jumped on me ...this is awesome
On Tuesday, June 1, 2004, Blinded_Tiger (518) wrote:

Thats why im a fan. Tiger