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Broken Angel
By morbiddemonchild
~This poem dosn't rhyme through the entire thing but it means something
to me so I'm putting it on here.~
I've been waiting for too long
I think I've finally given up
You won't come around & tell me what's wrong
So I'll just walk away
You cut your arms
You hide all your pain
You shell it out to me &
I don't want it
Please don't watch me when I cry
I know you love me
But I don't know why
I don't want you
Don't hold me in your arms, tell me everything's okay
I remember what you did
The blood that ran
The way you didn't care
You say you'll change for me
I don't believe you
You don't want help
So there's nothing I can do
I can only try to forget
To give up on you
I want to leave
Yet I know you need me
Please give me a reason to believe
Every word you say
That you really want to change
Kiss me to show me
I feel like a prisoner of my own fate
I need to know what's going on
Before it becomes too late
Tell me...
Please...
I Love You
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Copyright 2004 morbiddemonchild
Published on Friday, May 28, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Broken Angel"
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On Thursday, July 7, 2005, SorrowSoul
(54)
wrote:
Nice work. Sadness and confusion drive people to write very good poems just like this one.
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A former member wrote:
It doesn't have to ryme in order to be a poem. Most poetry doesn't ryme! I know what you are talking about though. I'm going through the same damn thing.
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On Friday, May 28, 2004, K_Love
(525) wrote:
I like it a lot. I agree it doesn't need a rhyme at all. Beautifully said. Lovely words. ~Kirsten~
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A former member wrote:
oh...very, very, very goooooooood!!!!!
So sad, words so shrilling, powerful..
Exelent work! Opera Ghost
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On Friday, May 28, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis
(467) wrote:
Doesn't need to rhyme, it was nice the way it is. Full of mixed emotion. I see why it means so much, well written, you got your point across ^_^ -roachy's wife
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