....water and sand....
By Spiritus_Frumenti
As Destiny travels upon the wind,
With utmost serenity,
Caressing the back of a gentle wave
Approaching the shore of our resting place
Laying so peacefully tinged in bronze
By the sweet reflections of a tired sun,
Soon dormant,
Followed by an awaking of the evening Swan
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Here, the images instills an insatiable wonder
Forever pondering at the meanings of water and sand
Of flowers and grass
Ostensibly in the stares of longing
With held back tears and elevated hands
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Here, words are spoken only in the lowest whispers
That of a soft breeze
Touching the fragile petals of a blooming carnation
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Here, souls have been gathered
Surrendered to the powers of Death,
Now believing,
It was always just another way to dream...
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Copyright © Juan Antonìo Thomas, 2004
Comments on "....water and sand...."
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On Monday, June 19, 2006, Exodus
(172) wrote:
Fucking wow. I love this so much. I really really enjoyed this one. Love it.
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On Thursday, September 1, 2005, abattoir
(115) wrote:
breathtaking....you can paint a picture with such a gentle mind's view.this was beautiful...
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On Thursday, June 10, 2004, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
Very inspiring ..you can always express yourself so peacefully and delicately . .it's releasing to read from you.
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On Thursday, June 3, 2004, Solace
(1069) wrote:
Everything you right is rife with a well mannered determinism wreathed in eloquent mist, everything is poingnant and every word sacred...Like drifting through Elysium fields...
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On Tuesday, June 1, 2004, Mr King
(547) wrote:
conscious insights... graceful movements of the universe... quiet stillness... peace in rest... death as not an evil, but a coming to peace... nice
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On Tuesday, May 25, 2004, Anth
(1133) wrote:
unbelieveable poem, the second part amazed me and i truly identified with the thoughts and was captivated in the way you presented them with such grace and flow, and the images of the first verse really bring the poem to life,truly stunning