Lovey Dovey Suicide

By aXe FactoR

I saw you
Oh yes, I did
Eyeballs rolling
Your shrieks
U gagged with the blood flowing from your mouth
U still looked beautiful
I loved you so much

You saw me
Oh yes, u did
Grinning at you with blood stained teeth
Waiting for a certain poisoned pill to take effect
You coughed, you smiled, tears in your eyes
I still looked beautiful
You loved me so much

No! I can't have you?!?!
No! u can't have me?!?!
No! we can't have each other..
No!not here o n this earth
But somewhere other than earth, there's a place for us... right???

I scampered beside you
Licked your bloody gash
Formed by my prized blade
Oooh it tasted so good
Made a similar slash
A slightly deeper one
So I could not see you pass off without me going first
No...I don't even want to bear this few seconds of emotional pain
I loved you too much

Merged our gapping wounds together
Made a promise of eternity
I'll see you soon.
We'll be together forever then
We lie side by side for now
Blood trickles as like our lives






Dying









Dying






























,
,
,
Dead.






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Copyright 2004 Psuedo_Me
Published on Saturday, May 22, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: wow,this is awesome,straight,that's the way people should talk to each other,no buulshit!

  • Loserland On Friday, June 4, 2004, Loserland (113)By person wrote:

    you are one fucked up girl..you know that? i like it

  • Blood of Winter On Thursday, June 3, 2004, Blood of Winter (300)By person wrote:

    This made me chuckle, just so many people that it reminded me of...stupid humans.

  • Johny_D_Lewis On Thursday, May 27, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (507)By person wrote:

    romeo and juliet? seems like a 90's version

  • aXe FactoR On Friday, May 28, 2004, aXe FactoR (342)By person wrote:

    lol... i would name them twisted RO & silly JU, twisted 4 RO 2 lick her slit wrist & silly JU for allowing herself 2 be killed!!! lol... :)

  • yslehc On Tuesday, May 25, 2004, yslehc (341)By person wrote:

    cool poem, i like the title too.. your style is different, but good.

  • sixsixnine On Monday, May 24, 2004, sixsixnine (489)By person wrote:

    HELL YEAH! I LOVE THIS! 669*

  • K_Love On Saturday, May 22, 2004, K_Love (531)By person wrote:

    Imagine what love can do to all of us... hmm... great write anyways, I've never read a poem quite like this it's very original indeed. ~Kirsten~

  • Midnight Shadow On Saturday, May 22, 2004, Midnight Shadow (67)By person wrote:

    So strong was your love...so much in love that you would die for each other. Wow...I am truly speechless. ~MS~

  • Savannah On Saturday, May 22, 2004, Savannah (235)By person wrote:

    um...wow. wow.

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