Help Denied

By Mistress Morbid

A helping hand * presented

taken * with greed and deceit

over and over * taken * mistreated

misused * abused and beaten to the floor















These two hands wrap their
slender fingers around your neck



Can you feel the hatred burning inside?

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Copyright 2004 Morbid Derangement
Published on Wednesday, May 19, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Anth On Saturday, May 22, 2004, Anth (1133)By person wrote:

    short but powerful, i like the contrasting image of the kind of bite the hand that feeds you or the giving hand can take all back am i making sense lol?, its another great work from you

  • Liath On Wednesday, May 19, 2004, Liath (35)By person wrote:



  • Mistress Morbid On Thursday, May 20, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405)By person wrote:

    Lost?

  • murder_in_clubland On Wednesday, May 19, 2004, murder_in_clubland (388)By person wrote:

    I really liekt his..its interesting and random i hope to read more of your works sopoon~ss

  • sixsixnine On Wednesday, May 19, 2004, sixsixnine (477)By person wrote:

    liked this piece it it's short but thought provocative* great work*669*

  • Drifter On Wednesday, May 19, 2004, Drifter (268)By person wrote:

    The only excuse for betrayal is love - the only result hatred. Powerful work.

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