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I....{submersion}
By A Velvet Tongue
I may not win
But I try..
I may not soar
But I fly..
I may not lose
But I'll die
I may not scream
But I cry
I may not find
But I hope
I may not speak
But I choke
I may not wait
But I want
I may not kill
But I hunt
I may not seek
But I stay
I may not believe
but I pray
I may not kneel
But I bow
I may not score
But I foul
I may not love
But I care
I may not smile
But I dare
I may not offer
But I accept
I may not lead
But I'm adept
I may not confess
But I sin
I may not play....
.....But I'll win..
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Copyright 2004 A Velvet Tongue
Published on Tuesday, May 18, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "I....{submersion}"
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A former member wrote:
This is a good way to play the game of life, we may not but we'll do... this is awesome work!!! Thanks
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A former member wrote:
This is an awesome peace brings out nothing yet opens the eyes of all don't end without starting.... its what i got out of it.
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On Saturday, June 24, 2006, Darkest_Addiction
(44)
wrote:
*stands in awe* what can i say? this was perfect
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A former member wrote:
I really like this piece...it's lovely and ended with perfection...the title summed it up perfectly.
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A former member wrote:
This is one of the best poems i've read it the longest time!!! Great job!! Its so meaningful and so deep. I could see you as a pro!!
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On Tuesday, May 18, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(388) wrote:
i like this...its beautiful ~ss
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On Tuesday, May 18, 2004, Anth
(1133) wrote:
i really like the way its written, full of positiveness and hope and so full of life(like you)..great work
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On Tuesday, May 18, 2004, BleedSilver
(298) wrote:
What if I win? What will you do then? I may not play the game, But I ALWAYS win. lol. Great one. I like the sureness of the poem. ~Mikey
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