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me & you
By sixsixnine
hold on
fuck it
let go
don't you even know
what's in your soul
you only know
my dick is up your hole
it's sodomy & out of control
baby kiss me
while i fuck you
lick & suck me
cuz i love you
let's play rape me
& i'll tie you
blow me crazy
as i eat you
no more lame
fucking games
just soothing fucking pain
no more blame
or stupid shame
nothing the same simply difrent
me & you
**669**
3/28/2003
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Copyright 2004 sixsixnine matthew parkey II
Published on Wednesday, May 12, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "me & you"
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On Tuesday, November 14, 2006, Mylissa
(845)
wrote:
Raw, I love it.
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On Tuesday, April 11, 2006, Beautiful Scars
(175) wrote:
damn.. this IS twisted.. i like it..
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On Sunday, June 26, 2005, Black_Cherry_Doll_
(69) wrote:
twisted and hot and real! I like it!!---Steph
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On Monday, May 16, 2005, peril_notion
(88) wrote:
Damn... you said it. I'll just leave it at that. Nicely done. ~Heather
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On Wednesday, August 18, 2004, AHHH
(187) wrote:
damn... you're twisted...I like...
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A former member wrote:
hmm... interesting...
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On Wednesday, June 9, 2004, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
hmmm, i liked it, strong,but oh so real.......urban
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On Sunday, May 30, 2004, sixsixnine
(477) wrote:
cry baby cry LOL! glad yall liked it *669*
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On Friday, May 14, 2004, aXe FactoR
(335) wrote:
haha...and i swear to come out with something sicker than this...!!! and really would like to thank you for your support on my works to. hugs**
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On Friday, May 14, 2004, aXe FactoR
(335) wrote:
very grossly sadistically cool... lol...i like... hahaha... who cares about it being over-direct rite? :)
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A former member wrote:
Haha...you are great...really direct, as Tracer said...you sound like you have a few bitches...**June**
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On Wednesday, May 12, 2004, Tracer
(100) wrote:
That was rather direct, although not my kind of poem, as with anth, I guess for its type, nice write. Guess this was very straight-forward, sometimes that is needed...^vTracerv^
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On Wednesday, May 12, 2004, Anth
(1133) wrote:
yeah not my kinda poem but i respect the immediateness that comes across in a way, and the flow was especially good
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A former member wrote:
nicly written but kinda disgusting. but its still a nice piece of writing.
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