Lady Love

By Liath

Lady Love

What she is to me, my One
I let her conquer me, totally
I've recieved the love I give
In open and warm embrace

So long she's been here
And I oblivious to her presence
Now that I'm with her
So shortly she stays

We are together, mind you
And will be, always

It just troubles me
How much I miss her, that is
Whenever she is gone
Or maybe, hasn't even left yet

I can't take the world
Without her by my side
It all seems so lame
So gray

Pointless, is my world without her
Like a koi in a bowl
Restrained behind it's translucent bounds
But whenever she swims beside me, suddenly we're in a great lake

So my Lade Love
For that's what she is
My only love
My only One
Forever, Lady Love

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Copyright 2004 Liath
Published on Saturday, May 1, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • WinterGrave On Monday, May 3, 2004, WinterGrave (258)By person wrote:

    i enjoyed the feelings this brought, nicely done~~~Grave

  • Mistress Morbid On Sunday, May 2, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405)By person wrote:

    How sweet...wonderful job -Morb

  • A former member wrote: This is EXACTLY how I feel with my boyfriend. "It just troubles me How much I miss her, that is Whenever she is gone Or maybe, hasn't even left yet" these lines describes it perfectly. Just ask T.P.U. Wonderful write. =-MO-=

  • Anth On Tuesday, May 4, 2004, Anth (1133)By person wrote:

    stanzas 5 and 6 are just totally brilliant!!!, superbly expressed, a beautiful poem

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