The Great Escape

By aXe FactoR

Summer, just another lovely day
Enjoying the warm sun beams glowing upon our faces
Hand in hand, I felt your racing heart beating again my palm on your chest
As u told me softly that I am yours…

Fingers entwined
Love stronger than wine
Until death do us part
Only you, my sweetheart…

Spring comes along in a flash
I remembered skipping joyfully to your doorsteps
No one’s at home, all’s quiet, silent…
Our bodies merged as we felt each other skin on skin…

Fingers entwined
Love stronger than wine
Until death do us part
Only you, my sweetheart…

Autumn comes faster than we can say goodbye to spring
Maple leaves flying around in the breeze
You spoke of a love so strong yet never gonna come true
I spoke of our love so great we could cling on to…

Fingers entwined
Love stronger than wine
Until death do us part
Only you, my sweetheart…

Winter this year was the harshest
As we struggled with our family to set us free
No one understands, except you and me
Pack the little we have in the dead of the night… we’ll take the car… leave…

Fingers entwined
Love stronger than wine
Until death do us part
Only you, my sweetheart…



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Copyright 2004 Psuedo_Me
Published on Wednesday, April 28, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: wow , judging by the dates, you have been good for a while, u didnt just get better, Loving it .ds

  • Johny_D_Lewis On Tuesday, June 1, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (467)By person wrote:

    this might make a good song

  • A former member wrote: I love this very much, i think that the repetition not only added the meaning to the poem, it showed the power that it beholds...Exellent, exellent job! OG

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Sunday, May 16, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm (1703)By person wrote:

    I enjoyed this one very much - you have a very nice internal rhythm to your writing. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • sixsixnine On Saturday, May 15, 2004, sixsixnine (477)By person wrote:

    Psuedo_me you rock so hard * that i'm hard* right now *669*

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