By aXe FactoR

It hurts
Darn bad
Living hell
Playing dead
Tasty revenge
So pure and true
That I take…
Liberate myself
Through your pain
Stab wounds
Blood flows
Leak through
Stained red
I laughed insanely
Blooded blade
Watched life flows away
Trickles of blood
Your wide-eyed terror
I thrust again
Piercing screams
Ringing the air
Licks blood on blade
I end it all
Your life
Your fate
Sealing it
With my cold kiss of death

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Copyright 2004 Psuedo_Me
Published on Wednesday, April 28, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Writtin very well. Very dark

  • A former member wrote: Deep, thats all i can say, Deep. Good write, I love it

  • Blyss Rayne On Thursday, June 10, 2004, Blyss Rayne (9)By person wrote:

    *shivers* chillingly wonderful. anger, darkness, and pain. my kind of poem. good job:) -taylor XD

  • Blood of Winter On Thursday, June 3, 2004, Blood of Winter (300)By person wrote:

    Difinitive genuis, keep them coming...

  • Johny_D_Lewis On Tuesday, June 1, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (506)By person wrote:

    should of caused the person more pain, to be considered misery, still well done

  • Emma Tenebrae On Monday, May 31, 2004, Emma Tenebrae (15)By person wrote:

    Love the fragmented style, full colors of anger, pain and revenge. Feels like psuedo-satisfaction was achieved.

  • A former member wrote: it is beautiful, strong, hollow and yet full,violent, but i still loved it . Opera Ghost

  • sixsixnine On Thursday, May 20, 2004, sixsixnine (487)By person wrote:

    i love this piece! sounds like a desprate call to peace* great write!*669*

  • A former member wrote: wow, so angry but emotional! i love it!

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