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R.C.
By Crystal Passion
Puppet
What are you doing
With your strings tangled
Can’t you do anything for yourself
And look at your rags
So torn and faded
Why must I do everything
Ill give you a new set of chords
And in return you will dance
Ill make you a new suit of velvet
And wear it you will for only me
And so as my will bends
So will your back
Just before your bones
Start to break
And as my words cut through
Will you bleed
For me
Because
I am your master
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Copyright 2004 Crystal Passion
Published on Sunday, April 25, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, May 12, 2004, _Andrew_
(245)
wrote:
the ending is old skool metallicaish >:D, but yea kryzu. this was good, but i know you've done 10xx betta. Lotsa Love, your drewby
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On Thursday, April 29, 2004, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
...is this really...? is this how you feel it was like...? jeez, I feel for you, and I want you to know I'm always here for you, just like you were for me...anytime you need something, just yell... -Darun
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On Thursday, April 29, 2004, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
*hugs x infinity*...because I can...
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On Monday, April 26, 2004, Lynaes
(859) wrote:
Oh wow this was haunting, scary and empowering, sent a shiver down my spine! Nice work I loved it. -L
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On Monday, April 26, 2004, WinterGrave
(258) wrote:
this was quite a read, nice to read your work agian.~~~Grave
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On Sunday, April 25, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(388) wrote:
. . . ~ss
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On Sunday, April 25, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(388) wrote:
oh a poem.. i really like it...~ss
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On Sunday, April 25, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(388) wrote:
lol i was stupid enought o read it when it was blank but i came back to check and "poof!" a poem! yay! its really good... btw yew luky girl ;) i read that poem bout u and sixie ;)~ss
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On Saturday, May 1, 2004, Anth
(1133) wrote:
its one of those thoughts that many people have thought before, but only you could create such a perfect poem from it,..superb
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On Saturday, May 8, 2004, Crystal Passion
(221) wrote:
why thank you, i appreciate the comment
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