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Closed Door
By Storm
Closed Door
Windowless Walls
Ice-cold Stone Floor
Stand Then Falls
Broken Window glass
Still No Way Out
Sickening Mass
Of Self-Doubt
Screaming Silence
Wordless Terror
Psychic Violence
Times Inferior
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Copyright 2004 Storm
Published on Friday, April 23, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Closed Door"
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On Monday, April 1, 2013, harlequinn
(9)
wrote:
This is a prime example of the power of emotion. A few syllables per line still brought me this feeling of melancholy and despair. Great work.
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On Thursday, June 10, 2004, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
there is despair, within your few words,you have described a maze that many cannot describe..........urban
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On Thursday, June 10, 2004, xX pretty vacant Xx
(64) wrote:
man just reading it makes me feel alone scared and trapped. hits hard.
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On Tuesday, June 1, 2004, BleedSilver
(298) wrote:
What an amazing ryhme...I want to write like this...*pouts in jealousy, then hugs storm* Good job, Storm...Now you hafta write more often...~Mikey
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On Friday, April 23, 2004, Solace
(1069) wrote:
Helplessness, and yet you know there should be something, anything you can do about it...This breeds terror indeed...
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On Friday, April 23, 2004, Solace
(1069) wrote:
i refer to those events that you wish were different, you ask why me? why you...there is no reason, there doesnt have to be and that is the frustration right there. Senselessness inane fury!
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On Friday, April 23, 2004, Solace
(1069) wrote:
Stand then falls... Gives a feeling of complete frustration and the urge to scream is relentless, a mixture of mindlessness amongst that despise of events
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On Friday, April 23, 2004, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
i agree with demon.*wordless terror.this was short and to the point.very blunt but i thoroughly enjoyed reading.nice write.-knight
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