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Trip
By knightmirror
suspended in animation,
the vivid colors melt together,
scorching life that had
once existed in altered states,
submerged in deprevation
tanks,tickled by an angels feather
lounged on Heaven's pad
then slowly turns and disintegrates
into thin air
pulsepounding prophecies
engage earth's extraordinary
hearthammering health
suffocating slipsliding souls
luminous glows surrender
before the darkest shade of grey,
blasphemous ecohes dull
keen hearing from the outside in,
searching for a defender
finding them only in my heart's ray,
this wrenching aura of my soul
being destroyed by myself from within
out of thick smog
such pollution
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Copyright 2004 knightmirror
Published on Thursday, April 22, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Trip"
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A former member wrote:
A breathtaking read. Good job.
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On Thursday, December 16, 2004, Sin
(1168)
wrote:
tantalizing from the very first line and riddled with lush imagery ~luminous glows surrender before the darkest shade of grey~ i love that line...magnificent write ~kristy
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On Sunday, April 25, 2004, Lynaes
(859) wrote:
The line "such pollution" was deeply profound and perfect, giving the images and expression throughout the piece. I totally agree with purr, this is amazing to read. ~L
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On Friday, April 23, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
*warns of approaching banality*... wow. wow. this is excellent. the second stanza is awesome... great ending; lovely darkwrite...and quite possibly my favourite of your works. Gorgeous. :)
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On Friday, April 23, 2004, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
hell yes. This was a percect write.. It said it all, on acount of the theme. :O) *ponders* Monkey
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On Thursday, April 22, 2004, nell
(271) wrote:
this was beautifuly portrayed.. so much rich imagery .. wicked write
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A former member wrote:
searching for a defender
finding them only in my heart's ray,
this wrenching aura of my soul
being destroyed by myself from within
out of thick smog
that is really good. cant wait to read more of your stuff
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