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Evil Eyes
By SilentStalker
I walk into the darkened room
And feel abrupt, impending
doom
I look around, and all I see
Are evil eyes surrounding
me
I can't escape; I cannot hide
I lock my thoughts
and fears inside
I look again, and now I see
The evil eyes
approaching me
I try again to find a hole
A way to
free my frightened soul
I turn around, and now I see
The evil
eyes on top of me
I'm frantic now to find a path
Why
do they seek to deal me wrath?
I cannot move; I cannot see
The evil eyes have conquered me
My legs are ripped; my arms
are torn
My conscience weak; my soul is worn
I think aloud,
"why must this be?"
The evil eyes now killing me...
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© 2004 Darun Ferguson
Comments on "Evil Eyes"
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On Wednesday, November 23, 2011, With love_Crow
(83)
wrote:
I love this.It's full of dark and wonderful themes. Well done!
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On Thursday, September 9, 2010, Kittykat
(35) wrote:
Awesome write, flows beautifully .
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A former member wrote:
this piece is exciting and intensifies as it progresses. i can relate to everything written in it. sometimes you walk into a room to be ambushed by others. its a terrible feeling indeed.
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A former member wrote:
this reminds me of my write , of substance , but in a more sinister detail ,this is articulate and flows to perfection :) thanks:)
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On Saturday, May 27, 2006, Vexed
(74) wrote:
interesting...I remembered reading "Lust for the Dead" and commenting...so I read your reply and decided to read...not bad...nice changeover too....
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A former member wrote:
I like how it gets more intense as the poem goes on till a powerful, gruesome climax is reached
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A former member wrote:
wow, your quite an intimidating poet, obvously no 18 year ammiture like me, Ill be reading alot more of yours, thank you for posting.
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On Thursday, April 22, 2004, Midnight Shadow
(67) wrote:
Liked how vivid the pictures were this painted in my mind. Love your poems. ~Midnight Shadow~
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On Thursday, April 22, 2004, Drea
(1443) wrote:
i liked the flow. whenever there is arms and legs beging torn off, it's always great.
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On Thursday, April 22, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
Interesting...-Morb
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On Wednesday, April 21, 2004, yslehc
(334) wrote:
crazy, it's kinda like one of my poems.. neat
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