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Cold sheets
By Moodswing
Fate
Ha! You speak that word as if...
as if my heart would flutter,
my will would simply break
Crumble neatly at your feet,
heart skipping several beats
I'd rather chew on rusted razor blades!!
Love
You, the cultured expert of seduction...
of broken promises beyond bounds,
expert lips and satin touches
Gladly will I draw delight
writhing wildly through the night
Don't fool yourself, I moan because it turns ME on.
Tired
That's right, I said tired...
Your time for redemption has passed
Don't whine, it is so annoying
You had your chance to claim your prize
You really thought I bought your lies?
I'll call you the next time my sheets are cold...
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Copyright 2004 Moodswing
Published on Saturday, April 17, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Cold sheets"
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On Sunday, September 2, 2007, MESUN
(230)
wrote:
whoa, nice! turning the tables.
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On Saturday, September 11, 2004, Dayer
(162) wrote:
awesome write, great job :)
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On Sunday, April 18, 2004, OLd SouL
(734) wrote:
I love cold sheets.
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On Saturday, April 17, 2004, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
...lovely...'I moan because it turns ME on'...I was on the floor when I read that one...that's hilarious when you think of the face you'd get from a phrase like that...the jaw would be locked at full capacity for a while...lol
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On Saturday, April 17, 2004, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
...I really don't see too many men thinking of themselves in the same way if someone gave them this...so nicely done...I love this... -Darun
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On Saturday, April 17, 2004, Neith
(21) wrote:
haha great write! i love it...nice picture by the way :) ~shy vampire
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On Monday, April 19, 2004, Moodswing
(63) wrote:
thank you for both compliments
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On Saturday, April 17, 2004, manywalks
(750) wrote:
Ah, but thats what they make electric blankets for. ~ mw
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On Saturday, April 17, 2004, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
...yeah, and BOB, I guess, eh...?
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On Saturday, April 17, 2004, manywalks
(750) wrote:
Yep.
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On Saturday, April 17, 2004, gracefullytorn
(61) wrote:
nothing keep going i was just commending you for it
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On Saturday, April 17, 2004, gracefullytorn
(61) wrote:
wow you dont hide anything do you
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On Saturday, April 17, 2004, Moodswing
(63) wrote:
whats to hide??? lol
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