when these two realms collide (starbound+infinite)

By purr_verse

"everything is art"...

we are...

saturnalia
the bar at the world's end
caligula storms & shadows
madness & myths in spiral winds
zero million squid junkies
reciprocal immersion...s
chaocracy/philosophies
hypocrisies
etceteras:
an opus dream suite trilogy...

weird. internaPatterns. bounce!

all hail...it's reigning...
and
dumb/struck

as
this

.slip.

aetheric
in offjazzed syncopations

is
as
us
in

little bonfires, blueberries & firefly dragons
nocturnes, preludes; as above, so below
ecletic erratic elastic emphatic
...in unbound tetras insane worlds...
overluxuriant decadent latenight popcorn-a-rama eXperience
lights...tunnels...cameras... act lifetion!
you... 3pm, silver and vodka! mE

in/lands

absolute and mirrored
soulseared hand/on/heart
with
time.too.fast, time.too.slow

this

newmoondivine
nocturnes and neonnights;
breathing between immersions and vividflow indiglow
kiss... in soultouched exquisite splendour
and seventeenth century nightthoughts;
as my heart is yours...

- our souls were in our names -
an evocation from inside.

Hello beautiful next door universe

in rapturelands
starbound+infinite

i love you


***




(with the magnificent bakkhus unbound)

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Copyright 2004 Natalie & Jon Lyndon
Published on Wednesday, April 14, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Very nicely done.

  • A former member wrote: what a supernova between these ears.

  • blue On Monday, April 25, 2005, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    ...undeniably a collaboration of great (beautiful) minds...so magickal, these words laid before us are true art. "in offjazzed syncopations"?!? *collapse* ~b

  • blue On Monday, April 25, 2005, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    this is one hell of a comment tower you've got goin' here...btw ;)

  • Trail of Fiends On Thursday, February 17, 2005, Trail of Fiends (37)By person wrote:

    Love the first lines and there's where you are similar to me. The difference is the vocabulary and the way you can out it all together. Stunning writer.

  • Anth On Saturday, January 1, 2005, Anth (1133)By person wrote:

    returning to your writes, as often i do, i always seem to find something new , i love what the first few verses captured and conjured, then on its just an explosion of your mastery fusioned

  • A former member wrote: Breathtaking . . this has an unpenetrable substance . . stunningly incredible ~ Rose.

  • Jadednoir On Tuesday, July 6, 2004, Jadednoir (28)By person wrote:

    Damn you two are divine.....i guess that is all I can say... simply divine.....~Jade~

  • A Velvet Tongue On Thursday, June 10, 2004, A Velvet Tongue (436)By person wrote:

    Celebrate life! and always look forward to the rises..amd falls..for no eden stays sweet forever..learn to walk throuhg it together and bliss shall always be but a soft kiss away..*lifts her glass* Here here!

  • A Velvet Tongue On Thursday, June 10, 2004, A Velvet Tongue (436)By person wrote:

    You both are so perfectly perfect...and combined..entwined...as one how cn eithe rof you ever fall?..Im so happy for your union..it is one surely not to be matched soon..I can only offer you both the joy and rature than myself and my other half possess..C

  • aXe FactoR On Monday, May 24, 2004, aXe FactoR (335)By person wrote:

    wow. this left me speechless after reading it. such is the prowess and depth of this work. i enjoyed reading every word. :)

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Thursday, May 6, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm (1703)By person wrote:

    I liked this one very much - what a beautiful, confusing, fantastically unusual, yet attainable, existence we have. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • Guttercat On Tuesday, May 4, 2004, Guttercat (30)By person wrote:

    rrr... I'm struck totally speechless by this... truly, it struck a chord within my soul... & resonated with the music of the spheres... I can do no justice toward this work with mere purrs of mine...

  • A former member wrote: *Sighs* this was breathtaking... I especially love your words (newmoondivine). It's beautiful purr... as is it's creator... =-MO-=

  • A former member wrote: Well, creators... both together make a perfect pair.

  • birdwell On Sunday, April 25, 2004, birdwell (140)By person wrote:

    what an unrelenting feast for the mind, so many fantastic lyrical portraits "little bonfires, blueberries & firefly dragons" i like that one especially, you two make an amazing medley ~db~

  • Spiritus_Frumenti On Thursday, April 22, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (341)By person wrote:

    so much unrelenting word play and unbelievable verbage combined with a passion and vision only two minds with such vivid worlds could ever contrive...starbound + infinite = beauty...-l-

  • knightmirror On Wednesday, April 21, 2004, knightmirror (426)By person wrote:

    jeez i was blown away by this.*eclectic erratic elastic emphatic* and *absolute and mirrored soulseared hand/on/heart*amazing job both of you.****much love-knight

  • sulkylime On Monday, April 19, 2004, sulkylime (191)By person wrote:

    what happens when these two realms collide? something astounding and infinite.. i am enraptured by this enchanting vision.. excellent..

  • Solace On Friday, April 16, 2004, Solace (1069)By person wrote:

    rendering my image of myself as but an infinitesimal being among the intellectual discourse of your collective being...Humbled...

  • Solace On Friday, April 16, 2004, Solace (1069)By person wrote:

    "Everything is art" "Our souls were in our names" The words spray over like a wave crashing against a cliff face, showering me with the divine expressions "magicmarvellous worldword" alliterations and nuances of expression pervade and entice

  • Dancing_Monkey On Friday, April 16, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    Well.. you did go beyond what I first imagined.. it's nice to see such tallent work this well together. The pictures of bakkhus and the feeling of purr.. defenetly a favorit

  • slow.burn.star On Friday, April 16, 2004, slow.burn.star (84)By person wrote:

    good fucking shit. twice the talent.

  • A former member wrote: adored lady and lord of sleightwrite shadywrought lightcaught thoughts! you're soulseers, in stormbrilliant balance; romance of chaostrance cosmic dance. i am humbly in awe.

  • capt_funguy On Thursday, April 15, 2004, capt_funguy (778)By person wrote:

    zero million squid junkies ... LOL ... love that lots ... the only thing i disagree with would be ... " overluxuriant" because i don't believe that's possible ... this piece is like sculpture from parts pristene ... loved it .. funguy

  • A former member wrote: 'caligula storms & shadows madness & myths in spiral winds…' your form& expressivecadence styleflow is, as always, beyond amazing; *smiles* (when arthands collide):you have beautifully worked our world/words together w/ poetica orchestration only a mast

  • A former member wrote: ...master could paint...euphonic evocations/'newmoondivine' ...'in rapture lands/as my heart is yours'...*kiss*

  • A former member wrote: 'ecletic erratic elastic emphatic'- your euphonic aliteration is electric diamonddelicious divine...this line is as brilliant as any heavy phased darkened arpeggiated powerchord distortion!

  • A former member wrote: i borrowed 'diamonddelicious' from purr... such art is her hand...

  • purr_verse On Thursday, April 15, 2004, purr_verse (1059)By person wrote:

    none of this would have existed without you... my deepest thanks for you magicmarvellous worldwords, and more...

  • OLd SouL On Thursday, April 15, 2004, OLd SouL (734)By person wrote:

    ok I've got the first round of drinks at Saturnalia. I shall go now and prepare a toast for this wonderous moment when two brilliant minds collided. :) :::OLd

  • manywalks On Thursday, April 15, 2004, manywalks (750)By person wrote:

    Hectic at first glance, methodic with the first read, exceptional bit of work. ~ mw

  • murder_in_clubland On Wednesday, April 14, 2004, murder_in_clubland (388)By person wrote:

    i like. . .its very ermm out there ~slave

  • flying_fox On Wednesday, April 14, 2004, flying_fox (573)By person wrote:

    As I read this it just got better and better...such happiness is a wonderful thing. Purrysis - love you forever. Unboundbro - welcome to the family. :) Fox

  • A former member wrote: thank you, foxsis...i am most honoured...

  • Six-Out On Wednesday, April 14, 2004, Six-Out (1435)By person wrote:

    Jeeeeeeebus. Love, it's great. And love seems to be something super great when it comes to you two, since we get to read the products. Great job.

  • Lynaes On Wednesday, April 14, 2004, Lynaes (859)By person wrote:

    Oh my.. This was mind blowing! I could just see it all happening, it was like being engulfed in a warped, stunning beautiful shockingly captivating world. Magnificent work! ~L

  • girlafraid On Wednesday, April 14, 2004, girlafraid (480)By person wrote:

    i love this...it's so overwhelmingly lovely and sentimental...so many wonderful lines...i like them all...this rocked, purr ;) *afraid*

  • Anth On Monday, April 19, 2004, Anth (1133)By person wrote:

    when two geniuses combine, wow double the magbitude of excelence, too much to take in, amazement,the way it moves,captivating and special


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