hope doesn't live here anymore

By KittyStryker

secretly
it depresses me to know
the stars i wish on tonight
have long since exploded
and flame now
only
in universal memories.

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Copyright 2004 Bast
Published on Wednesday, April 14, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Exodus On Wednesday, April 14, 2004, Exodus (172)By person wrote:

    this is simple and bitterly beautifull...yet srong...i get this...lovely work

  • gracefullytorn On Wednesday, April 14, 2004, gracefullytorn (61)By person wrote:

    that thought is extremely sad and the way u presented it was so raw and to the point i love it

  • Dancing_Monkey On Wednesday, April 14, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    Realy good... The ending carryes is true. Monkey

  • cre On Wednesday, April 14, 2004, cre (411)By person wrote:

    *sigh* i hear you kitty. *hugs*


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