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A Song For the Lost One
By maddin foxxxy
It was you
too long ago
As yesterday is
A year so long
is one hour that long?
I never forget
what could have been
just the never was
and the never will
the electric guitar
(rages) (screams)
As the beams
of silence
wins
You sang for yourself
what you felt like
being ...
wild and free
dinner to me
never too weak
losing
is always an option
without gambling
all in
this love
it went like sin
creeping in
you felt like sin
rushing in
I sang for you
what I felt like
being with you
openhearted
long departed
never too weak
losing is always an option
without even playing to win
where there's love
there is loss
is a minute that long?
wait ... and listen
where there's you
where there's you
there is love
It felt like sin
nearly wrong
A second that long.
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Copyright 2004 maddin foxxxy
Published on Tuesday, April 13, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "A Song For the Lost One"
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On Friday, November 19, 2004, darkleprechaun
(56)
wrote:
with every piece i read i only want read more... i have found a drug my sweet maddin foxxy thank you.
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On Tuesday, June 1, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti
(341) wrote:
yet again, another passionate work..."where there is love/there is loss" really hit me...astounding..-l-
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On Wednesday, April 14, 2004, Midnight Phoenix
(240) wrote:
Wonderful from start to finish Maddin'. Despite the soft and flowing verse, I would have to say this piece has a fiery passionate feel to it. Would make an excellent song.
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On Wednesday, April 14, 2004, OLd SouL
(732) wrote:
..a heartbeat can't be trusted as a measure of time... sometimes the heart will skip a beat... sometimes it races... But there are times when a moment seems to short... or far too long...
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On Wednesday, April 14, 2004, OLd SouL
(732) wrote:
and I do believe the heart is to blame. I don't know why I just said all that but thats what I thought of after reading this. I enjoyed much :) :::OLd
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On Wednesday, April 14, 2004, Anth
(1133) wrote:
i love the flow of this, absorbing and deep, beautiful the 8th stanza especially, feels like the poem is whispered in a way, mezmorizing work
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On Tuesday, April 13, 2004, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
Wow....sorry for the cliche, but your works so often do this to me, leave me with nothing but...blank. Wonderful.
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