Your Suicide Night
By Syn
I find you lying there...bleeding. Too cold to touch.
Your eyes rolling, back and forth unable to focus on anything but your
wound. The blood red water, warm holding in your life, creeps over the
edge of the bathtub...your final resting place. I try to reach out, but
you are too far gone to embrace me. I am losing you. I am begging, pleading,
though you cannot form a coherent thought, your brain suffering from the
drugs and lack of blood. The music of "My Immortal" ringing, blaring.
I wish it to go away, but continues in it's torment of me.
I hear the sirens in the distance, as you refuse to sustain your life for
me. You continue the bleeding, almost helping your life drain out from
your wound. Our rings on the nightstand, together, perfectly placed on
top of your note to me. "You still have all of me". I ask through blood
shot, tearied eyes. Why?
Comments on "Your Suicide Night"
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On Saturday, August 7, 2004, Blyss Rayne
(9) wrote:
this was beautifully written. I'm sorry it has to be on such a painful subject. Great job, and I am sorry for your loss. You are in my prayers. XD -Taylor-
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On Friday, July 2, 2004, Sinnocence
(49) wrote:
this reminds me exactly of a horrible night my love experienced. he sunk too deep to escape and cut his legs to hell... all while "my immortal" played. this is creepy.
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On Thursday, June 24, 2004, Lord Kalgalath
(182) wrote:
:'(......words escape me.
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On Monday, May 24, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(388) wrote:
Simply gorgeous..~ss
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On Monday, May 24, 2004, Syn
(76) wrote:
Thank you :) -Syn
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On Sunday, April 25, 2004, Daegonna
(27) wrote:
Wow... Wonderfully written... and the emotions... SPECTACULAR! ~Daegonna~
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On Monday, April 26, 2004, Syn
(76) wrote:
Thank you :) -Syn
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On Friday, April 9, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(388) wrote:
wow this reminded me of when my dad killed himself eek sad sad memories....its been a bad night..good write ~slave
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On Friday, April 9, 2004, Syn
(76) wrote:
Thank you, slave...and I am sorry *hugs* -Syn
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A former member wrote:
this made me cry. how sad. im sorry for you..*hug* ~toxic
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On Friday, April 9, 2004, Syn
(76) wrote:
I love hugs...Thank you. -Syn
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On Friday, April 9, 2004, K_Love
(525) wrote:
Beautiful this is a tear jerker.. Lovely write ~Kirsten~
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On Friday, April 9, 2004, Syn
(76) wrote:
thank you, kirsten *grin* -Syn
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A former member wrote:
mmm. I find my suicide night(S) Quite fun and amuzing
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On Friday, April 9, 2004, Syn
(76) wrote:
Well, I wish I found this suicide night fun and amusing, though somehow I was not able to find any humor in it. Losing a husband is never pleasant.
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On Friday, April 9, 2004, SilencedAngel
(52) wrote:
Beautiful work. Very touching and full of emotions. Intense beyond words.
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On Friday, April 9, 2004, Syn
(76) wrote:
Thank you... *sniif, sniif, tears* :( -Syn