Your Suicide Night

By Syn

I find you lying there...bleeding. Too cold to touch.
Your eyes rolling, back and forth unable to focus on anything but your wound. The blood red water, warm holding in your life, creeps over the edge of the bathtub...your final resting place. I try to reach out, but you are too far gone to embrace me. I am losing you. I am begging, pleading, though you cannot form a coherent thought, your brain suffering from the drugs and lack of blood. The music of "My Immortal" ringing, blaring. I wish it to go away, but continues in it's torment of me.
I hear the sirens in the distance, as you refuse to sustain your life for me. You continue the bleeding, almost helping your life drain out from your wound. Our rings on the nightstand, together, perfectly placed on top of your note to me. "You still have all of me". I ask through blood shot, tearied eyes. Why?

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Copyright 2004 Synful Pleasure
Published on Friday, April 9, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Blyss Rayne On Saturday, August 7, 2004, Blyss Rayne (9)By person wrote:

    this was beautifully written. I'm sorry it has to be on such a painful subject. Great job, and I am sorry for your loss. You are in my prayers. XD -Taylor-

  • Sinnocence On Friday, July 2, 2004, Sinnocence (49)By person wrote:

    this reminds me exactly of a horrible night my love experienced. he sunk too deep to escape and cut his legs to hell... all while "my immortal" played. this is creepy.

  • Lord Kalgalath On Thursday, June 24, 2004, Lord Kalgalath (182)By person wrote:

    :'(......words escape me.

  • murder_in_clubland On Monday, May 24, 2004, murder_in_clubland (388)By person wrote:

    Simply gorgeous..~ss

  • Syn On Monday, May 24, 2004, Syn (76)By person wrote:

    Thank you :) -Syn

  • Daegonna On Sunday, April 25, 2004, Daegonna (27)By person wrote:

    Wow... Wonderfully written... and the emotions... SPECTACULAR! ~Daegonna~

  • Syn On Monday, April 26, 2004, Syn (76)By person wrote:

    Thank you :) -Syn

  • murder_in_clubland On Friday, April 9, 2004, murder_in_clubland (388)By person wrote:

    wow this reminded me of when my dad killed himself eek sad sad memories....its been a bad night..good write ~slave

  • Syn On Friday, April 9, 2004, Syn (76)By person wrote:

    Thank you, slave...and I am sorry *hugs* -Syn

  • A former member wrote: this made me cry. how sad. im sorry for you..*hug* ~toxic

  • Syn On Friday, April 9, 2004, Syn (76)By person wrote:

    I love hugs...Thank you. -Syn

  • K_Love On Friday, April 9, 2004, K_Love (525)By person wrote:

    Beautiful this is a tear jerker.. Lovely write ~Kirsten~

  • Syn On Friday, April 9, 2004, Syn (76)By person wrote:

    thank you, kirsten *grin* -Syn

  • A former member wrote: mmm. I find my suicide night(S) Quite fun and amuzing

  • Syn On Friday, April 9, 2004, Syn (76)By person wrote:

    Well, I wish I found this suicide night fun and amusing, though somehow I was not able to find any humor in it. Losing a husband is never pleasant.

  • SilencedAngel On Friday, April 9, 2004, SilencedAngel (52)By person wrote:

    Beautiful work. Very touching and full of emotions. Intense beyond words.

  • Syn On Friday, April 9, 2004, Syn (76)By person wrote:

    Thank you... *sniif, sniif, tears* :( -Syn

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