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Pierce My Soul
By Mistress Morbid
Cradle my senses
In your arms
As you sing me
A sweet lullaby
Caress my thoughts
Filled with a
Joyous dance
Of a forbidden land
Gaze into my
Glass eyes
And know that
You melt away
My sorrows
Of yesterday
Thank you
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Copyright 2004 Morbid Derangement
Published on Sunday, March 28, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Sunday, November 12, 2017, worm
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wrote:
I hope you will get this comment... come write more...
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On Friday, March 4, 2005, Mr King
(547) wrote:
beautiful... absolutely...
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On Wednesday, April 14, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(388) wrote:
aww so sweet *melts* Jons a lucky guy
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On Tuesday, April 6, 2004, Liath
(35) wrote:
The comfort of another is the sweetest cure of all. You've captured this perfectly. =)
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On Sunday, March 28, 2004, flying_fox
(573) wrote:
this is simply beautiful...it is so touching with wonderful word combinations... it left me with a feeling of being safe and secure. *sigh* Fox
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On Monday, March 29, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
Thats what I was trying to portray, I guess I did what was intended. Thank you! =)
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On Sunday, March 28, 2004, Tracer
(100) wrote:
Nice poem of hope and happiness, small but nice write, but nobody ever said short was bad...^vTracerv^
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On Monday, March 29, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
Nope not bad at all (reffering to short poems in general), I think the shorter it is, the more direct and to the point it is.
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On Sunday, March 28, 2004, ONEANDLONELY
(117) wrote:
IT HITS HOME. LESS, IS MORE.
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On Sunday, March 28, 2004, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
....*heart explodes*
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On Sunday, March 28, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
::huggles::
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