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DP's Insecurities
By Mistress Morbid
Such hostility thrown
around this place
Why does everyone
have so much hate
A place to come to
when times get tough
But everything going on
just makes me say enough
Quit all the fighting
and the bickering
Sometimes we just need to
think of better things
Suicide is no way
out of this hell
Believe me you would rather
retract into your shell
One day when you
are older you will see
All this hostility
will just amaze thee
Everyone has their
own opinions and such
But it was never there
for you to touch
If you have nothing
nice to say
Please don't talk
it's better off that way
I really don't condemn
the people that cut
There are other ways out
you just have to have the guts
Why can't you see
I really do care
But you leave me here
with nothing but a glare
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Copyright 2004 Morbid Derangement
Published on Friday, March 26, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Thursday, July 22, 2004, Ravenblade
(313)
wrote:
wow, something without such elegant phrasing in it, but still greatly written...and careful with the not approving suicide on this site, its the cause for most of the arguments...honestly I don't care, but some people it seriously bugs... >Raven<
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On Tuesday, April 6, 2004, Liath
(35) wrote:
Woahahaha. True indeed. But what can you do? the little headliner at the top of the Page IS :.DarkPoetry.com.::. - It's expected to have that sort of played out cliche mood from people.
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On Friday, March 26, 2004, KittyStryker
(711) wrote:
but... but... smut is good times. :(
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On Friday, March 26, 2004, KittyStryker
(711) wrote:
i agree with what you're saying. i think being downright cruel is unfair. i think people have the right to their opinions- however i also think there's an appropriate way to express those opinions, on both sides of the coin.
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On Friday, March 26, 2004, darkangelXlll
(108) wrote:
other than that very nice write and well said. ~darlin
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On Friday, March 26, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
Thank you, Ive really had enough of people throwing cruel words around. Its just not nice.
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On Friday, March 26, 2004, darkangelXlll
(108) wrote:
"If you have nothing nice to say Please don't talk " i think some ppl on this site should read this and interpite it really we are here to learn not to be told we "suck" and if you have to say that. thats the point of d/pmail.
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On Friday, March 26, 2004, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
Does this mean I'll be forever silenced?
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On Friday, March 26, 2004, cre
(411) wrote:
"If you have nothing nice to say Please don't talk it's better off that way" *sigh* I so agree, and I'm so tired of how mean SOME people here are. I'm glad the majority is nice and wonderful people . .but to the ones who aren't I wish they'd jus
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On Friday, March 26, 2004, cre
(411) wrote:
I wish they'd just shut the hell up already.
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A former member wrote:
no offense but i quite disagree...people are very sweet to me here, fortunately. and well sometimes people just hafta vent n this is a good place...*shrugs*
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A former member wrote:
There's also a classy way to go about it and I think this was more directed at the attacks being thrown arround lately which are extremely childish. Venting is one thing, being rude is another. Loved the write. ~Ship!
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A former member wrote:
I agree...everyone hates on everyone and everything
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On Friday, March 26, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
I know, im sort of sick and tired of everyone trying to slit everyone's hopes and dreams.
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On Friday, March 26, 2004, Recycled
(94) wrote:
You have captured the day-to-day drama of this site well. Please stay.
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