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to know you dont love me
By darkangelXlll
i close my eyes tighter and tighter as to cease the pain of your arms around me and your lips upon mine it hurts to to know that though you hug me and kiss me you dont truely love me it hurts with such a pasion to know ill give anything for you and you dont really care about me but as you hold me i close my eyes and all of this rapidly runs through my mind and tears begin to drop i cant take it anymore will this be the end.
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Copyright 2004 darkangel13
Published on Sunday, March 21, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Saturday, November 20, 2004, Malice In Wonderland
(987)
wrote:
ah, and the painful games of love...tisa twisted emtion we all strive so hard to find... Kya
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On Saturday, September 11, 2004, Munkey
(79) wrote:
To know thats somone no longer loves you is to die and lose a part of yourself.But if you love yourself... well then you can't lose what you always have with you. Never let it end and...Keep it dark. -Chance-
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A former member wrote:
i'm presently going through that and you did a wonderful job at putting it into words, is all i can possibly say. like my reflection.
-Tab
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A former member wrote:
I've felt that way many of times even though I thought he loved me I had serious doubts.
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A former member wrote:
I'm running out of things to say to you...becuase all your poems are good...but I can relate to this...
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A former member wrote:
Well said...love can hurt even the best of us.
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A former member wrote:
wow, thatz the same way i feel about nick . i can never let go even tho therez a dead end somwhere along the path.
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On Sunday, March 21, 2004, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
oh jeeez ... so sad .. little slice of day in the life of heartache ... sweet write ... funguy
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On Sunday, March 21, 2004, Necromancer
(71) wrote:
wow that is ultra deep. i love it as it brings a tear to my eye ~Necro(Justin)
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