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my love
By darkangelXlll
As i slowly feel your hands touch me shivers go through my body i fill with joy and happiness i fill with love and at that momment everything and everyone is forgotten then your lips end up upon mine for those flicking seconds i just forget anything you've ever done anything pulling me back from your arms i love you and want you more than anything in this whole wide world my one and only love...
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Copyright 2004 darkangel13
Published on Saturday, March 20, 2004.
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"Poetry"
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On Saturday, November 20, 2004, Malice In Wonderland
(987)
wrote:
Sweetly poignant...emotrion at it's happiest...good write... Kya
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On Saturday, September 18, 2004, A_Puppet_Show
(166) wrote:
The form used here, fail in the hands of many people. In my eyes you do not here. There could be a little playing with the ending of the lines while keeping them long still(the little break when read out loud)
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On Saturday, September 18, 2004, A_Puppet_Show
(166) wrote:
But that is realy how you read it; my eyes have trouple with the 3-4 line shift. The content of the poem is just fine, I loved following your track.
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On Saturday, September 18, 2004, A_Puppet_Show
(166) wrote:
In a way the exact opposite of the poem we both commented on. Leaving me to be a selective hypocrite. But arent we all? -Tiger-
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On Monday, August 23, 2004, Munkey
(79) wrote:
Oh to feel this way about someone again I would kill myself and walk back out of Hell itself to prove my love for that person. Beautiful...painfully so. -Munkey-
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On Monday, July 26, 2004, sixsixnine
(477) wrote:
i read this again, & realized how much pain we can put ourselves thru when we love without control* great piece by the way i really can relate & like it alot*
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On Saturday, July 24, 2004, sixsixnine
(477) wrote:
FUCK IT FEELS LIKE READING THE SPILL OF SOMEONe wHO DOESn'T CARE TO FEEL. SO BEAUTIFULLY UNREAL! *669*
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A former member wrote:
it hurts so much when the one we love can't help but hurting us...no matter how hard we try, our twist for right always turning to wrong, i like the dynamics in this once readin a bbit deeper
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On Thursday, April 8, 2004, Necromancer
(71) wrote:
i wish someone would love me that much. ::cries:: I love it. ~Justin
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A former member wrote:
I've been there but in the end nothing works out. Every thing you've or hes forgotton about that you or he did always comes back to bite you in the ass.
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A former member wrote:
again...another kick ass poem by you!
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A former member wrote:
these few lines are just amazingly simple yet so complicated. this i can really relate to. im sadened by this yet joyful. great as always
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A former member wrote:
Passionate and heartfelt. It makes me smile.
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