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The reflection in the water
By Mistress Morbid
The things I want in life
Are of the reflections in the water
When I go to touch it
It ripples and fades away
Only then to reappear
To toy and taunt with my head
For then again I try to touch it
It ripples and fades away
Sometimes it's laughing at me
And at times it would glare
I would still try to touch it
But it ripples and fades away
Everyday I would sit for hours
Staring at the reflection in the water
I reach out my hand and try to touch it
But it ripples and fades away
When I look in the mirror I see a hideous face
And a beautiful girl in the water
I desperately try to touch it
But it ripples and fades away
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Copyright 2004 Morbid Derangement
Published on Saturday, March 20, 2004.
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On Thursday, April 1, 2004, DarkNTormented
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wrote:
its beautiful i love it you are a very good writer!!
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On Monday, March 22, 2004, Solace
(1069) wrote:
aaah reflections...*I see my self in the reflection of the lake, it shimmers and fades, just as my desire for life. For love. For you.* Reflections of both memory and imagery...My thanks
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On Saturday, March 20, 2004, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
Reaching, hoping just this once, the reflection we see is really an alternate plane of existance, and maybe, just maybe we can leap into it...wonderful write. eft me feeling hopeless and alone. :)
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On Sunday, March 21, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
Not entirely alone...
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On Saturday, March 20, 2004, Lynaes
(859) wrote:
Beautifully conveyed.. The way thoughts of our insecurities fade in and out of focus in our minds, and we create a picture of what we want but it remains forever untouchable. Stunning work.. And you ARE a beautiful girly. :) ~L
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On Saturday, March 20, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
Why thank you! I have had those feelings in the past, and sometimes they are hard to get rid of.
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