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a friendship departed.....
By hopeless
She dances as though what you say doesn?t hurt
Wallows in self pity as she slowly turns to dirt
She is the one
The only true love
Who can come in your life and make it all work
Problems of her own never seem to get her down
But when it overwhelms her she finds her ways to cool herself down
Along with the edge of a dagger
Flowing smoothly with her baby like skin
No touch of roughness
No sense of rage
Only when she starts to cut
Her blood begins to stain the page
Wallowing in self pity
Her own friends she doubts
When a boy came and ruined it now look at the way things turned out
More blood now comes just not from the wrist
Only this time her agony wont end in self bliss
~ to my friend.... you know who you are and that i love you...
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Copyright 2004 hopeless
Published on Thursday, March 18, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Saturday, April 10, 2004, urbanhumility
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wrote:
i am impressed, your emotional honesty serves you well.......keep up the fight.....urban
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On Wednesday, April 7, 2004, Beautiful Scars
(175) wrote:
Nice, i enjoyed this. -fairy-
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On Friday, March 26, 2004, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
This is great! I know how these things go, broken hearts are hard to mend, just be there for this friend and make sure they know your there.
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On Friday, March 19, 2004, K_Love
(525) wrote:
Great work, lots of sadness, it reminds me of some things and makes me think. Great write thanks for sharing Kirsten~
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On Friday, March 19, 2004, Lynaes
(859) wrote:
So heart breaking.. It reminds me of my friend. A beautiful piece drenched in sad images. Awesome work. ~L
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