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Dirty Looks & Adrenaline
By maddin foxxxy
I'll be hiding
inside your dirty look ..
take me from there
to where you want me
to go
and drift
into liberation
Poison yourself
in my veins
I want to feel your
drug on me
breakin' through my system
and makin' each inch
your home
My place is your home ..
Torn as it may seem
The drapes are on
the floor
the water's drowning
whole
and floating by there are
all the faces
I have worn
But now I've seen it
through
Inside the savage
in your eyes
is where I want to
lie
To wear another kind of face
and change into some
other kind of grace
the face
with the smile
this night
will be wild
this night
is on fire
I'll be drinkin'
for the sake of us
I'll be hidin'
inside your
dirty look
let's take it
from there
I'm an open book
..
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Copyright 2004 maddin foxxxy
Published on Sunday, March 14, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Dirty Looks & Adrenaline"
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On Tuesday, August 14, 2007, Reefer_rave
(146)
wrote:
now I need to smoke a cigarette this was so good
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On Wednesday, April 28, 2004, Stranger
(264) wrote:
Utterly fantastic. This has deep reaching tentacles that left their mark in the remotest parts of my being.
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A former member wrote:
'Poison yourself
in my veins' deep/dark/edged...poetry to drink of flesh for intoxification...
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On Saturday, March 20, 2004, Midnight Phoenix
(240) wrote:
It feels so natural Maddin. Your creativity is endless, and your words are inspirational. I love the ending. Actually, I love the entire piece!
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On Monday, March 15, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti
(341) wrote:
"Torn as it may seem The drapes are on the floor the water's drowning whole and floating by there are all the faces I have worn" this stanza hit me deeply...for no matter what face you have on, in your poetry you will always be beautiful...-l-
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On Monday, March 15, 2004, OLd SouL
(734) wrote:
'and floating by there are all the faces I have worn' I love that line.. as well as others in this poem. I like the feeling the conclusion has. Inviting and intriguing. :::OLd
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On Monday, March 15, 2004, flying_fox
(573) wrote:
I saw the title and had a feeling it might be one of yours...great words as always. I always feel right 'there' as I read them. Fox
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A former member wrote:
Truly amazing. My favourite "verse" if you want to call it that was "I want to feel your
drug on me
breakin' through my system
and makin' each inch
your home " I loved the whole thing. It was gorgeous---Alyssa
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