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It wasn't the W*ED
By Cwn Annwn
Smoke on the balcony of your room
Light your blood red bowl
Watch the smoke floating in the air
I'd never met anyone like you
No one so considerate, so caring
You seemed like the only one who understood me
I love the way your hair curls when it dries
Your boxers with the glow-in-the-dark dollersigns
Lay on the messy bed that's not even yours
I'll give you head for another hit
No one will understand...just how you made me feel
Because I know
It wasn't the weed...that made the night un-real
~For Dave~
3/13/04
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Copyright 2004 Noctem Aeternus
Published on Sunday, March 14, 2004.
Filed under:
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Comments on "It wasn't the W*ED"
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On Thursday, August 25, 2005, capt_funguy
(778)
wrote:
this was pure and easy ... social economics ... sassy reality ... didn't have to be another hit , could've been a sip of wine , or a stick of gum ... the time was right ... awesome work ... funguy
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On Wednesday, April 14, 2004, OLd SouL
(732) wrote:
Lucky Dave. Sometimes I wish I was still a pothead. :::OLd
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On Wednesday, April 14, 2004, Cwn Annwn
(91) wrote:
!!!!!I didn't do it for another hit!!!!I did it because I liked him more than anyone I've ever met In my life.!!!!
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On Saturday, March 27, 2004, bloody LOVEly
(86) wrote:
"I'll give you head for another hit"-didnt i say this was the reason? ...sorry if i cant say id do the same...maybe kiss. ^_^ cuz kissing is more fun!! PLFFFFF! @_@ you scare me.
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On Monday, March 15, 2004, -Oz-
(134) wrote:
*sigh*...don't get me wrong....i probly would have done the same thing...~oZ~
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On Sunday, March 14, 2004, Exodus
(172) wrote:
sexxay....lol...i enjoyed reading this alot....great write...
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