Harvesting Hurt From a Heavy Heart

By knightmirror

Infatuation
Blossoms like rose petals in morning's light
Stretching
Up,over,and beyond horizons seen
Complication
Insists this is real and I must fight
Fetching
Courage to tend to all emotions with gangrene

Before they become the death of me

Lying on a stretcher made from clouds above
Conjuring up energy creating content
Sollutions to dillemas concerning this love
struggling to keep it from being sent

Before rejection becomes a tree

Paralyzed with passion

Savoring
Emotions you spilt from your beautiful soul
Trying
To be chivalrous and soak up every liquid shard
Favoring
You,shining bright,held captive in doubts coal
Crying
Hoping my tears can heal your smile that's charred

I wish to be
A paralyzed tree
Spreading eternal glee
That you will always be able to see

Harvesting your heart
Is the first start

That is if we're destined to cross path's

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Copyright 2004 knightmirror
Published on Tuesday, March 9, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: This is of me. I would rather die than be with one taken, and yet I found my Eternal Love in the heart of Taken~ness. Two years I sorrowed, held myself from His gaze to respect that which was...and then, when I had given up all hope, His broken castle crumbled and He was left in the ashes of new beginning...and in time, cultured as a shell cultures a pearl, mine. Aptly captured, this.

  • A former member wrote: Wow... I love it. I know this feeling.

  • Sin On Friday, December 10, 2004, Sin (1168)By person wrote:

    i dont know how such a beautiful poem only got 5 comments...this was soft and passionate, tender and fragile..utterly lovely Chris, well done ~kristy

  • aXe FactoR On Monday, May 31, 2004, aXe FactoR (335)By person wrote:

    beautiful beautiful words...breath-taking. the beauty & pains of infatuation all at once.

  • Lynaes On Tuesday, March 9, 2004, Lynaes (859)By person wrote:

    Very dreamy indeed, I love certain abstract lines such as "Lying on a stretcher made from clouds above". Very, very nice work I loved it. ~L

  • flying_fox On Tuesday, March 9, 2004, flying_fox (573)By person wrote:

    a wonderful dreamy piece...the first stanza is particularly well written - I really like the structure and emphasis on words. The ending is great. Fox

  • Anth On Sunday, May 2, 2004, Anth (1133)By person wrote:

    supremely imaginative,excellent visuals in this,the first and 2nd verses especially creative, wonderous write

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