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I bid you adieu
By Mistress Morbid
Everything I hold near to my heart
Are all falling apart
Everyone is fading away
Leaving me to my own solitude
My walls are crumbling down
And revealing all my deepest
Thoughts...
Secrets...
So vulnerable
So cold
Sends me into an
Uncontrollable quiver
HELP
Can anyone hear me?
No
Of course not
A tear drop forms at the
Corner of my eye
Slowly slipping down my cheek
Like the hot flow of blood
Pumping through my veins
A hand gently wipes the tears away
And embraces me tightly
His touch warm as the sun during a hot spring day
His essence blinding
And smell overwhelming
He takes my bag of burdens
And throws it over his shoulder
He grasps my hand and leads me
To heaven
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Copyright 2004 Morbid Derangement
Published on Saturday, March 6, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "I bid you adieu"
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A former member wrote:
great poem
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On Wednesday, April 14, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(388)
wrote:
It's interesting i'm not one for "heaven" and such but still a good write ~slave
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On Tuesday, April 6, 2004, Liath
(35) wrote:
Very interesting. I didn't really expect the going to heaven part though, but a nice twist there at the end. I enjoy your material, Morbid. =)
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On Sunday, March 21, 2004, darkangelXlll
(108) wrote:
WOW this is something i really really enjoyed reading as to it brought tears to my eyes its very nice and deep i love the endin really bright i like the way you layed everything out LOVE IT!
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On Monday, March 8, 2004, Stranger
(264) wrote:
This is definitely one of my favorites from you. The ending is very powerful.
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On Tuesday, March 9, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
It makes me very happy everytime I read it. Thank you, the ending is what I worked hard on.
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A former member wrote:
thats really good. i exspecially liked the title.andria
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On Saturday, March 6, 2004, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
I don't know, but I saw it as the pain was a lot, and God took your hand and led you to heaven after your death. Either way, nicely done.
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