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Pyromaniac
By Mistress Morbid
A flame
Flickers
To the left
And to the right
Like a dancing temptress
Seducing me
Wanting to touch
Her writhing body
I reach out
Touching the tip
Pulling back reluctantly
Then I plunge into the blazing inferno
To be consumed by it's vigor
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Copyright 2004 Morbid Derangement
Published on Saturday, March 6, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
my one friend is a pyro lol so i can relate rather well, he torched my shirt once! anyways, nice work.
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On Wednesday, September 1, 2004, DarkWolf
(415)
wrote:
This can be about fire, or relationships. Nice work. -Michael
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On Saturday, May 29, 2004, Anth
(1133) wrote:
this is really cool, it just lights the image in my mind so easily and dances around for a while i read every brilliant line
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On Monday, March 22, 2004, Solace
(1069) wrote:
This was written on my birthday, My name is supposed to mean "fire" or something so i find this appropriately dedicated to me :)
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On Tuesday, March 23, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
Aw, well my pleasure! =)
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On Tuesday, March 9, 2004, Stranger
(264) wrote:
Very well done. With a short poem, you must choose every word judiciously, because every inconstancy is magnified. And, here, you did so superbly.
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On Saturday, March 6, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
i'm a bit of a closet pyro myself. pretty stuff, that firedance. :)
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On Saturday, March 6, 2004, Necromancer
(71) wrote:
Fire is to be respected as well as the dead. If you mess with either you should expect the consiquences. The flame controls you, you do not control the fire. Wonderful work.~Necro(Justin)
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On Saturday, March 6, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
Thank you, fire is a beautiful thing, but didnt momma tell ya not to mess with fire? =)
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