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i must...
By urbanhumility
i must...
I must tonight, reach deep within...
I must tell of all my frailty...
Its foolish life, its chance of "fading"....
Of all desire and tempting fate, turning all things wrong...
I must see the love of mothers,
I must feel my lover....
To belive in goodness.....
I must practice,
I must fool myself...
i lie and tell tales of virtue...
In this "belief" , in end, "it" is brought forth...
I must fashion....
I must make when all temptation is near.....
I must embrace the "adoration" of love,
I must be enveloped....
Or this vision is a lie, or this belief is dead...
Or my love,
or myself......
Fades away, never remembered never practiced....
i must...
i must remember....
i must belive......
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Copyright 2004 urbanhumility
Published on Thursday, March 4, 2004.
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On Thursday, June 4, 2009, Mylissa
(845)
wrote:
this will linger...i love it.
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A former member wrote:
A prayer...amen..kudos mate.
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On Wednesday, August 22, 2007, unspeakable truth
(100) wrote:
Intriguing piece....
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On Sunday, October 29, 2006, Mistress Shadow
(252) wrote:
This created a pause for reflection. Well put together. I'm surprised I've never stumbled into you before, and thus will keep my out for more from you. ~T
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On Tuesday, May 9, 2006, Err0r
(365) wrote:
This was so motivational. I like this very much.
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On Tuesday, February 14, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(670) wrote:
"I must embrace the "adoration" of love, I must be enveloped...." Amazing, just freakin amazing! I have chills upon chills from the other writes. You simply speak to my soul. Julia~
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On Friday, December 31, 2004, sIo
(926) wrote:
"I must see the love of mothers, I must feel my lover.... " damn dude, your writing simply does ROCK.this is amazingly written.
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A former member wrote:
This had a sense of desperation in it and the message within I can honestly say I have been up against on more than one occasion. Almost a salvation-like crisis. Awsome job man. ~Ship!
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On Wednesday, August 4, 2004, xX pretty vacant Xx
(64) wrote:
"or this vision is a lie, or this belief is dead" that line in particular stood out to me. but the whole thing is just powerful, without screaming it's message. great write.
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On Saturday, July 24, 2004, liquid_emotion
(323) wrote:
Ahhh, desperation.
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A former member wrote:
Quite the moving dedication. -END-
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On Thursday, June 17, 2004, nell
(271) wrote:
a calming and desperate grasp for hope, that is what this leaves me with... wonderful thoughts urban, it was a pleasure to read
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On Thursday, June 10, 2004, Jonas
(720) wrote:
love is a golden idol... and belief lends it its power... sometimes it looks like copper covered with patina.
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On Saturday, June 5, 2004, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
wondefull urb, just wonderfull *favors*
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On Thursday, June 3, 2004, missanthropic
(26) wrote:
with this piece you have summed up those thoughts that daily allow me to continue reaching for myself.... excellent work
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On Thursday, May 13, 2004, DoctorAsh
(373) wrote:
Very nice urban.. its nice to see some work around here on a [enlightening note]. Beautiful. [D&A]
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A former member wrote:
This is hypnotic, almost...it crawled into my mind, and will remain there, I imagine, for a good part of my day...thank you. **June**
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On Thursday, May 13, 2004, Anth
(1133) wrote:
another great work, a feeling of desperation and a sense of the unreachable. beautifully crafted and thoughtful
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On Saturday, May 8, 2004, sixsixnine
(477) wrote:
sounds like a powerfull song*669*
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On Tuesday, April 27, 2004, Stranger
(264) wrote:
So many layers in so few lines. So much faith and so much doubt. So much strength and so much vulnerability. So much talent and so much humility.
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On Saturday, April 24, 2004, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
"I must see the love of mothers, I must feel my lover.... " .. .this inspirational write left my mind in wonder . ..wonder how there's real honest people like you in this world. Wonderfully done Urban ..couldn't have made it better than this.
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On Thursday, April 22, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti
(341) wrote:
a very honest and pensive poem with so much passion filling the empty spaces of every verse...this is extraordinary, refreshing and tells a powerful message...-l-
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On Thursday, April 15, 2004, manywalks
(750) wrote:
This cleansed a place in my mind, eloquently written, beautiful. ~ mw
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On Friday, March 26, 2004, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
Very good.
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A former member wrote:
agreed, What can I say, I like it alot
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On Tuesday, March 9, 2004, Drea
(1443) wrote:
The need and the drive to remember and believe is powerful. Your words ring true. "I must embrace the "adoration" of love,/I must be enveloped..../Or this vision is a lie, or this belief is dead..." , those lines hit hard.
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On Tuesday, March 9, 2004, Mr King
(547) wrote:
ONE LOVE... THAT LOVE IS AND NEVER DIES... ILLUSIONS FADE... REALITY RISES... Through Trish and I you live forever, and through you Trish and I do too... Without Trish there is no CHRIST VICE... CHRIST VICE and URBAN HUMILITY are ONE... Let PEACE be done.
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On Friday, March 5, 2004, Lynaes
(859) wrote:
Wow I love this piece, very hypnotizing, lingering and delicate. Awesome work. ~L
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On Thursday, March 4, 2004, hopeless
(51) wrote:
WoW.... this is excelent..... i am in awe this is wow.... favorites!!! wow this is so good.... ~hopeless
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