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unspoken honesty
By KittyStryker
maybe
i'll see you at that party
saturday night
with all
the cool
kids
maybe
we could sit on the couch
stained
with last year's romance
we could make out
and pretend
we're having a good time
we could
go home together
wake up
and tell the usual
white lies
of "i'll call you"
and "we should hook up again"
we can
act
like it meant something
kiss
like we know
each other's
names
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Copyright 2004 Bast
Published on Sunday, February 29, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Friday, March 5, 2004, Ravenblade
(313)
wrote:
I've known simliar situations and feelings so many times, loved it and keep it up
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On Tuesday, March 2, 2004, WinterGrave
(258) wrote:
well done, most enjoyable read.~~~Grave
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On Tuesday, March 2, 2004, Jonas
(720) wrote:
well written... me liked. i know your name. ;-)
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On Tuesday, March 2, 2004, KittyStryker
(711) wrote:
::giggle and kiss::
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On Monday, March 1, 2004, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
Whoa... this one stings. I can relate to this. Good one.
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On Monday, March 1, 2004, Lynaes
(859) wrote:
Awesome work, I loved it. ~L
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On Monday, March 1, 2004, Emptyness Inside Me
(171) wrote:
I find this piece very true in modern time nowadays, great write ~Emptyness~
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On Monday, March 1, 2004, Jaded Jezzabelle
(328) wrote:
I really got something out of this...thanks...you made me really think about my behavior of late.....jaded
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On Monday, March 1, 2004, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
great ending ... great overall ..... simple and sad thought overlay - cool clarity ... funguy
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On Monday, March 1, 2004, Solace
(1069) wrote:
I love drifters comment... My friend, who happens to be male, just got put through this, i despise the mentality behind one night stands nowadays...
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On Monday, March 1, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti
(341) wrote:
i think the titles says it all...i like this piece...-l-
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A former member wrote:
Funny how man is buckles under his standards in the face of uncertainty and lonliness.+T.P.U+
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On Sunday, February 29, 2004, Drifter
(268) wrote:
sure, it's a date.
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